10 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2009 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
stanley? stanley? i know it's you, stanley. you can't hide in MTT like that.
brilliant.
Author's Response: Thanks! But I gotta tell you, read the Stanley in the most recent chapter of "One Week." That person has channelled Stanley. I bet they eat just pretzels.
8 [Report This]Date: February 10, 2009 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great idea for a story! Your Stanley is so perfect and I could totally hear his deep, slow voice as I read his lines. I especially loved "If someone did that to my little girl, I'd kick his ass"
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I don't know if this is my favorite line in the story ... but it's close. Appropriately or not, the present author feels rather protective of Pam. And having Stanley open a can of whupass on the source of her unhappiness was quite satisfying to write.
Date: February 09, 2009 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Very very cute idea, and a just reward for Stanley.
I loved this line, and I could just hear Stanley saying it:
"It's Dwight," said Stanley, peering at his newspaper. "He probably saw Elvis, too."
Author's Response: Thanks! Stanley earned his pretzel.
Date: February 06, 2009 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
ha !
I knew Stanley was the Manley (:
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Date: February 02, 2009 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Stanley's voice was perfect in this, and so was Jim's reaction. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! As I said elsewhere, I found Jim a bit of a challenge. I'm glad his reaction seemed credible.
9 [Report This]Date: February 02, 2009 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Jim and Stanley--what a clever pairing! You captured both personalities so well, Guten Tag. I so wish this had really happened! How perfect. I really can't wait for more (TWSS) ; )
Author's Response: Thank you -- all of you -- for the kind comments so far. Oddly, I found Stanley easier to write than Jim. I could imagine him saying every line of dialogue. But while I could imagine what Jim was *thinking*, it was harder to imagine what he was *saying.* I find Jim to be a riddle, wrapped in an enigma, shrouded in mystery.
Date: February 02, 2009 05:31 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh interesting take! I would have loved that to happen. go stanley.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: February 02, 2009 03:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I love Stanley...and I wish he had done this on the show. We don't see enough of tough stanley in my opinion :)
Author's Response: Gotta love Tough Stanley. Thanks!
Date: February 01, 2009 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
interesting twist - i like it
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: February 01, 2009 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome Blossom, EXTRA awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
8 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2009 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was great! Thought you captured Stanley perfectly! What a fresh and new angle!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: February 01, 2009 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2009 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooooh, bravo! I like this concept :D
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: February 01, 2009 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
YEAH! Stanley the Manly!
Author's Response: Thanks! The contrast between Jim and Stanley was a big point of the story: Stanley's calm maturity (well, okay, maybe a bit *too* calm) versus Jim's utter confusion.