Date: September 04, 2009 03:38 pm Title: Can We Show a Little Discipline?
ooh...love it =]
Date: September 04, 2009 02:10 pm Title: Can We Show a Little Discipline?
what the heck?
sorry, that was my first response, but i loved chapter. i definitely answered my questions of the last chapter, but i'm still a little confused. i mean, with audrey vs. pam. could you tell me why in a review reply.
but about the last segment, i loved how pam goes back to jim. nice!
Author's Response: In terms of flashbacks, I'm not done with Audrey vs. Pam. You'll see exactly why Jim broke things off with Audrey. So in the next chapter, you'll get some closure with Audrey. I liked Audrey too, but the point of her in the story is to show that Jim wasn't pathetically pining over Pam for ten years. And Jim was definitely in love with Audrey, but not as much as he was still in love with Pam....you'll see what happens.
Thanks for the review! And I'm glad you liked Audrey! I was afraid that people were going to hate her...
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2009 09:53 am Title: Can We Show a Little Discipline?
YES! Thankyou! Haha, that whole chapter with the flashback was to trick us was it. Anyway I'm glad it's worked out this way! Can't wait for epilogue
Author's Response: No, the flashback was to show that Jim wasn't always pathetically pining over Pam for the last ten years...and to trick you guys...just a little. hehe!
Thank you for all of your reviews, Noodles! You've been sticking to this story since the beginning, and I couldn't let you down! :)