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Reviewer: G_Luv08 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2009 10:14 pm Title: Surprise

I love this story, and I especially love the last line of this chapter. So perfect, touching, and concise all at the same time....I would love to see something like this happen on the show (as long as the cameras were there to see it)!

Reviewer: Jewelsy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2009 02:25 am Title: Time

Lovely! This was sweet and fluffy and perfectly steamy! I had many awwww moments while reading your story.
P.S. Staralafur is in Icelantic and even though I am not from Iceland and I can't speak a word of it, I loved that song so much I walked down the isle to it when I married my husband. Its beautiful. Keep writing!!!

Reviewer: jkfan9989 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2009 02:57 pm Title: Surprise

OK, that was awesome!

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2009 12:43 pm Title: Surprise

super. delicious. awesome (:

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2009 08:12 am Title: Surprise

::throws rice::  Awww!  Very sweet.  I'm a sucker for visuals, so thanks for the links.  Shame on you for putting such fluffy ideas in my head while I'm trying to work!  ; )

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2009 01:36 am Title: Surprise

I am not surprised you are so in love with this chapter - it was freaking awesome and beautiful and amazing and just guh.
Their vows were perfect and I swear I could hear them saying them in my head (does that make me insane?)

I am so in love with this story and never want it to end hehehe.

Ohhhhhhhhh I won you in the auction *squishes you*

Reviewer: MelBal Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2009 08:54 pm Title: Surprise

I'm in love with this chapter too! There's just nothing better than a JAM backyard wedding!

Reviewer: JAMhands Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2009 08:04 pm Title: Surprise

Beautiful. Simple, eloquent, perfect. Wonderful.

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2009 08:00 pm Title: Surprise

Awww. That was sweet. As always, lovely work.

Reviewer: uglyscientist Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2009 07:45 pm Title: Surprise

TTTTTTTTUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!

i'm crying!!!

this was so beautiful!!

Reviewer: stjoespirit04 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2009 07:36 pm Title: Surprise

How in the HELL do you do this!?!?! Seriously? I can't stop smiling, and giddily laughing at Michael's ...it feels...like...the three of us are married, now, since Pam is my business partner and imagining this actually happening on the show.

You, my friend, are the essence of awesomeness. I humbly bow to your greatness.

And, please keep these coming. TWSS.

Reviewer: IThinkWeBrokeHisBrain Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2009 07:25 pm Title: Surprise

:)

That is all.

Just kidding, of course that's not all. I think this might be my favorite chapter of all so far, but I already told you why so like you said, no need to repeat myself. Michael cracked me up in this though, seriously. What a doofus, but typical of him. I definitely do not think we will let you be done with this any time soon, just so you know :)

Reviewer: JAMhands Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2009 07:16 am Title: Mistake

I liked this a lot. I think it was very realistic. Pam instantly regreeting what she had done, but sticking with it. Jim hurt and worried about how he's going to handle things without her. Great job!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2009 03:18 am Title: Mistake

Something I wish we'd seen on the show. As usual PERFECT xx

Reviewer: Liv Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2009 11:18 pm Title: Mistake

Wonderful, as usual. This is seriously my favorite series! :)

Reviewer: IThinkWeBrokeHisBrain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2009 10:59 pm Title: Mistake

Looks good, as usual. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2009 08:11 pm Title: Mistake

I am glad that you didn't end this story, there are so many other 'firsts' to explore with Pam and Jim.

OK, so when does Chuckie M get out if Scranton?!? His missing sense of humor is really getting under my skin.

Again, good update, and can we look forward to an update on your other story soon? Sorry, I'm greedy.

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2009 01:20 pm Title: Mistake

aw, cute (:

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2009 01:59 pm Title: House

very nice.

B

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2009 01:46 pm Title: Morning After

That was excellent! You really capture Jim & Pam very nicely.

B

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2009 12:26 pm Title: House

really super duper awesome.

 

you always make me happy (:

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2009 10:55 am Title: House

Whenever I see an update the first thing I do is check to see if it says completed.  I am so happy you are going to keep going.  I love all of their firsts!

Reviewer: JAMhands Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2009 07:03 am Title: House

Very sweet chapter. Oh, how I loved the fact that they did not have her freak out over the house.

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2009 05:18 am Title: House

I really liked the way you went through Pam's thought processes on this one. I've always found Pam's acceptance of Jim buying a house without her a little hard to swallow, but reading this, I could better see how she might have accepted it for what it was, and how she would have had the reaction she did. Nice job.

Reviewer: moonmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2009 12:07 am Title: House

aaaawwwwwwwwwwwww!!!
That was lovely.
and I'm glad it's not the last chapter!

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