10 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2009 10:29 pm Title: House
"Maybe he'd made the mess in the microwave."
^^haha that line made me laugh so hard!
I'm so glad you're going to continue this. Everytime I see an update, I'm excited. This was perfect. :)
Date: March 24, 2009 07:52 pm Title: House
Yay! I was also totally ready to give you a long list of firsts that you could continue writing about because this story is too good to end yet. You really capture their interactions and inner monologues so well, whether you're basing it on an episode or not and it's great! And as long as I am not in class, I'll definitey beta the next one, looks like we both have patience problems sometimes :)
Date: March 24, 2009 07:40 pm Title: House
I am soooo glad you are a liar about this being the end ;) I encourage this sort of lying eeeeeeeeeep. So excited you have decided to carry on, come on, you have SO many firsts.
First time one of them is ill, first christmas/thanksgiving in the new home, first baby, first day of school, first trip as a married couple, oh SO SO many.
Love this, this was such a favorite episode of mine and you captured it beautifully :)
Author's Response: Haha, if I do all of those, this story might never end!! You've given me ideas about some one-shots, though...and actually....actually, you're amazing. I just got an awesome idea about an upcoming chapter. I'm glad I was lying, too!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2009 07:39 pm Title: House
I've been a huge Fan of your stories but just recently logged in to give you a review! I can't wait for Chapter 14!
10 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2009 07:47 am Title: Proposal
The ring on her finger looked good against the skin of his neck. She usually didn't like to kiss with her eyes open, but she couldn't stop watching it. In between her fingers, she could see a vein pulsating, throbbing in time with his heart beat, and she liked the way it made her finger move just the tiniest bit, which in turn made the ring sparkle. This, right here, is made of love.
Date: March 21, 2009 07:42 am Title: Morning After
Whoa! The shower, well that was just... whew! Another great chapter, just the right mix of sexy and sappy. I love it!
Date: March 21, 2009 07:38 am Title: Time
Thank was perfect. Loved Pam's little trip into fantasyland and the fact that Jim caught her. FNB and her promises of naughtiness. The picnic was so sweet and romantic, and the dessert that came after dessert, well it was incredibly hot. Thank you!
Date: March 21, 2009 06:12 am Title: Proposal
His husky voice was in her ear. "Say it again." He grabbed her hips and lifted her, giving him enough room to thrust himself into her. "Say yes again, Pam."
Holy hell that was HOT! This whole story is so sweet and exactly what I like to believe happened when the cameras were off lol...
10 [Report This]Date: March 20, 2009 09:40 pm Title: Proposal
OH.
MY.
GOD.
stealing pam's last line.
guhhhhh (:
Date: March 20, 2009 06:52 pm Title: Proposal
Okay, I realize that this is my first time reviewing, but I've been following this story for a good six chapters now, and I LOVE it! It's usually the first one I re-read after an episode that severely lacks everyone's favorite couple. Anyway. There were a few typos in the beginning, and Jim's spoken line is "I just--can't wait," not couldn't wait. It doesn't really matter, I just thought I'd point that out. I loved everything else you did, though. You're completely spot-on when it comes to writing Pam, and I love the side comments. I know you only have one chapter left, but, should these moments occur while on the show, d'you think you could maaybe update when they get married and/or have kids? Just a thought. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: March 20, 2009 05:06 pm Title: Proposal
Squeeeeeeeeeee that was so good. I always love a good proposal fic, and with some smut thrown in, you can't really get much better. I adored Jim wanting to feel Pam against him after they had some sexy time, that was cute.
PFFT > there are SO many more firsts, don't finish this =)
Date: March 18, 2009 07:04 pm Title: Time
Love the chapter /series and the revisit to their rooftop date. Funny I was just rereading this when I flipped to IFC and the jaguar shark scene in Live Aquatic with Steve Zissou was playing. I knew I'd heard that song before!
Date: March 18, 2009 06:13 am Title: Morning After
I love this story. Thank you for taking us through the firsts. I am hoping you have many more.
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2009 06:53 pm Title: Look
I just adore this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: March 17, 2009 02:49 pm Title: Morning After
I thought this worked just fine :) You've been doing an absolutely wonderful job with all of these and I'm excited to read what comes next.
Date: March 17, 2009 01:24 pm Title: Morning After
ooh, this was goooooooooooood.
I cannot explain how I feel (:
Date: March 17, 2009 12:56 pm Title: Morning After
Phenomenal as usual, babes. I’m so happy you are writing this series, you have captured everything so perfectly and beautifully… plus it’s now getting HAWT lol. You’re awesome and I’m sorry real life is sucking for you right now – smooches you.
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2009 09:03 pm Title: Glimpse
omg amazing!!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2009 09:45 am Title: Time
Pretty sure this is the most perfect "first time" fic ever.
Date: March 08, 2009 08:58 pm Title: Time
Jim's back against the headboard---it doesn't get much better than that! Thanks for another great chapter!
5 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2009 07:15 pm Title: Time
Wowee! That was absolutely perfect. I have to say it was the closest I've ever read to what I envisioned in my mind that it would have been like. I thought the picnic on the balcony was very much something Jim would do.
I loved where they first see each other undressed and their reactions at having their first skin on skin contact with each other. Awesome, sexy and prefectly written!
Date: March 08, 2009 07:10 pm Title: Time
um, why are you so awesome?
&& that cap is EPIC (:
Date: March 08, 2009 06:21 pm Title: Time
That screencap is amazing. Four years of buildup, and it was totally worth it.
By the way, good job with the steam in this chapter. Whew!
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2009 05:43 pm Title: Look
it was wonderful! and sigur ros is perfection.
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2009 05:30 pm Title: Time
that was amazing.