10 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2009 09:46 pm Title: Three Thousand, Four Hundred, and Thirty-Seven
Okay I already love little Jimmy, aw! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Isn't little Jimmy fun! I enjoy writing him and developing him into the Jim we all know and love! So glad you like it!
10 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2009 11:49 am Title: Three Thousand, Four Hundred, and Thirty-Seven
Liking the concept. Hmm I wonder if it's just a coincidence that Pam's name wasn't actually mentioned in first chapter ;)
It'd be a nice twist if it was someone else and then you told the story of how it happened.
P.S. Any chance of Every Other Weekend being updated?
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! (It really was just a coincidence that she wasn't mentioned at first, but then I liked the intrigue it set up. I'm not totally sure how I'll play it out.) I'm glad you like the concept. I like seeing things from Jim's perspective. It's fun to write. rnrnAnd P.S. Back - I'll update that one. The story is finished, I just never finished posting it over here. I'll try and do that soon!
Date: February 20, 2009 09:55 am Title: Three Thousand, Four Hundred, and Thirty-Seven
Wonderful job! I really enjoyed that you took special care to have that 9-year old mindset, using simple dialogue and having him write about very concrete subjects in his paper. Nice reference to Mighty Mouse as well; those cultural references really make the setting so believable.
I promise I'll get chapter 2 beta'ed by the end of the weekend so this awesome story can continue! :)
Author's Response: Yay! I like writing a little Jim. It was fun and difficult at the same time. :) I can't wait to hear what you have to say about Chapter 3! And I'm hoping to have Chapter 4 to you in just a few days! You're awesome! And thanks again!
Date: February 19, 2009 08:40 pm Title: Three Thousand, Four Hundred, and Thirty-Seven
This is really fun so far, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you are enjoying it and I hope you continue too!
Date: February 19, 2009 07:08 pm Title: Three Thousand, Four Hundred, and Thirty-Seven
This is a great chapter, and an AWESOME idea for a story. I'm really impressed (and jealous I didn't think of it first, haha) but seriously, KEEP IT UP, because it's awesome. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means a lot...really. It's always great to see that my efforts are being enjoyed by more than me! Hope you like the rest too, next chapter coming soon!