10 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2009 09:52 pm Title: Ten thousand, Four Hundred and Forty-One
My heart hurts for him aw :(
Author's Response: Mine too! It's such a sad time in his life, I couldn't not write it. Thanks for the review!
Date: March 05, 2009 05:42 am Title: Ten thousand, Four Hundred and Forty-One
I'm really enjoying this story, I think it's a cool concept, and this has been my favorite chapter yet. You captured his heartbreak very honestly, I think. Worst day ever indeed. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I hope you enjoy reading it...hope the rest of the story can stand up to this one.
Date: February 26, 2009 06:19 pm Title: Ten thousand, Four Hundred and Forty-One
Regardless of the "unending amount of mistakes" (whatever dude, I've seen way, way worse), I still LOVED it. The way you approached his initial thoughts and feelings about the aftermath of Casino Night was great, especially the fact that he didn't run into Pam and have a huge encounter that doesn't fit with canon. I also loved the detail of how he couldn't shut his eyes without seeing her; that just seems so very Jim. I dunno why, just does. So romantic.
Fantastic job!! I can't wait to read the next chapter (and I swear to you, I will get it done earlier this time)!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!! You are an amazing beta...and if you've seen worse than mine, well, then you really can do anything! LOL...I'm glad you are 'loving' it. I guess that makes it easier for you to beta, huh? rnrnAnd take your time. You have a life and I understand that...just don't mind me when I start sending you more chapters...I've been writing more than normal laterly :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2009 05:56 pm Title: Ten thousand, Four Hundred and Forty-One
I seriously had tears in my eyes reading this. Amazing and incredible and exactly what I imagined happened.
Author's Response: Awh! I'm glad I was able to entice that kind of emotion, it means I'm doing my job as a writer. Thanks so much for reviewing...that makes my day!