Great job!! I am so intrigued by Jim's high school life! You did a great job of creating characters and a backstory for his schooling, and I think that if you do more high school chapters, it'll be really interesting to see how these characters' relationships develop. I am loving how this story is coming together like a puzzle; every chapter is a new piece!! Hope to get more soon!

Author's Response: I love that you think of this story as a puzzle! That was exactly how I thought of it when I decided to do the skipping around stuff. Lots of moments that will eventually add up into the life of my favorite salesmen! If I haven't said it lately, you are an awesome beta! Talk to you soon!