10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2009 04:08 pm Title: Ten Thousand, Eight Hundred and Three
I really liked this.
I'm a sucker for first date fics (:
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking a couple moments to review! I love first date fics too and had to figure out a clever way to show it. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2009 07:22 pm Title: Ten Thousand, Eight Hundred and Three
Best. Chapter. Yet. Seriously, I was like blown away by the imagery and attention to detail in this one. And you got Jim's feeling so spot-on, I can totally see your words through his actions on the episode. And this line:
What a long day. It started one way in a big, unfamiliar city, and ended right where I’ve supposed to be all along.
KILLS me. It's so perfect and yet so simple. Seriously, you were on fire when you wrote this cause this is amazing. Fan-freakin-tastic job, my friend!!
Author's Response: Hey girl! Thanks so much :) This one took a lot out of me, but it was so worth it in the end. And I'm glad that it really came across well. Thanks so much for all of your comments and notes and stuff. I love getting your feedback! Thanks again!! (I've got more coming to you soon...I hope! I'm a little stuck at the moment, but I think I finally know where I want to take the next chapter.) You rock. Just making sure you know that :)
Date: April 11, 2009 06:03 pm Title: Ten Thousand, Eight Hundred and Three
So, I finally sat down and read this in one setting. What a gem of a story you have here. :) I liked that you jumped around in time instead of going chronologically, makes the story more interesting as the pieces of Jim's life fall into place. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank so so much for taking a second and reviewing, it means a lot to me. There is something great about knowing your story is entertaining others...thanks again!