Date: May 07, 2009 04:12 pm Title: Three Thousand, Four Hundred, and Ninety-Nine
Great job!! I loved seeing Jim as a little kid, all mischievous and stuff. You write him as a child very well. The family dynamics of his household were very interesting to see too, especially how he interacted with his brothers. Hope we get to see more of Jim's childhood in the future!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Dundie! I had a blast writing little Jim and I'm glad he came off well. You'll certainly be seeing some more keys points in little Jim's life as we go on...so many chapters to write! :)
Date: May 07, 2009 03:55 pm Title: Three Thousand, Four Hundred, and Ninety-Nine
i've fallen in love with this story, but i especially love little boy Jimmy. :) it's just too cute. and i was wondering where you were going with all the random details of the day, but it was perfect! all the plans for the summer dashed. :) nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Little Jimmy is so much fun to write :) I'm so glad you liked it!