Date: June 13, 2007 07:37 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so cute and fun. Janie and Kurt are just soooo - for lack of a better word at this moment- cute!!
Author's Response: Cute works!!! Thanks Claudie! I'm so glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I don't know how/why I didn't review this when I read it before, but this chapter (the whole story, for that matter) is absolutely awesome.
You know, one of the....brilliant things in all of your stories is your ability to add in tiny details that just make it all come alive. Like Jim picking Janie up and hanging her upside down with her pigtails above the floor - I could totally see him doing that. So little moments of verissimilitude like those just make it all come together that much more. That and the fact that your dialogue is always spot on.
And you never, never leave us lacking in the happy Jim/Pam department - which is one of my other favorite things about you. :o)
Author's Response:
You are just incredibly sweet. And OK - verissimilitude? Can I just tell you how much that tickles me to see a word like that in reference to one of my silly fanfics?
Awesome.
And never fear. It is not within my makeup to write anything BUT a happy (or hopeful) ending for Jim/Pam. Just can't do it. I've tried and I cave - EVERY TIME. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2006 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my God, how absolutely delicious. I already love this story to bits, it's gorgeous, it's lovely, and I burst out laughing in the middle and near the end and wow, you, you are a geinus. I love the CocaCola reference [it is in truth just like them, or at least, just like the Jam I've allowed a space in my mind - they live in the apartment directly above my Sceience notes], and Jell-O! Jell-O.
Good Lord. How absolutely awesome.
I'm going to read it again and love it. WOOHOO.
Author's Response: hee! moofoot. What a lovely thing to wake up to. I'm so very glad you like it. It's been way too much fun to write. I hope you enjoy the rest!
8 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2006 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
So, I wasn't totally sold on the premise, but having loved all of your other stories, I gave it a shot. And, I have to admit. It's just as cute, and I'm smitten. I'm really going to enjoy reading the rest of this story : )
Author's Response: I love that you said smitten. :) And I really hope you d enjoy the rest. Thanks so much for giving it a shot!
9 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2006 12:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay! :) You had mentioned this story to me a few times; I'm so glad you got it started. This was very funny. I can't wait to read more. I'm clearly forever your groupie. ;)
Author's Response:
Yay!!! It took me much longer than I thought. I have this whole other cute passage about Jim and Pam that - sigh - I guess will have to wait for another fic. ;)
I'm sincerely honored.
7 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww! This is so cute! Both of them pining. And I love the little hints that the "adults" haven't changed much over the years.
Author's Response: Yeah. It will become even clearer that their offspring have progressed much further than their parents soon. LOL! Glad to hear you liked it!
8 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Janie has to break her parent's jinxes?! Brilliant! That made me laugh soo hard!
Author's Response: Thanks Brittney. Can you just imagine the adorableness??? LOL!
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, I liked this. Too sweet.
Author's Response:
Color me sugar coated. :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was fun! I too loved that Kurt was never allowed to try jello. And how cute that Pam and Jim still play by the unflinchingly rigid rules of Jinx!
Author's Response: Rules are rules kaystar! LOL! I'm glad you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute!
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 06:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay for a likeable Schrute! I can't wait to see Pam's reaction when they get engaged...
Author's Response:
I like to think Kurt inherited the best of Dwight and Angela - not that that isn't a tad hard to find. :)
I'm pretty sure everyone's reactions are going to be something to see. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 06:32 am Title: Chapter 1
wow a hapert who has it for a schrute. interesting
Author's Response: Stranger things have happened. ;)
Date: October 03, 2006 06:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh, nice start, Krissy! I love the little details you've put in here. It makes me laugh to think Janie might tower over Pam ;) I don't know why. Just makes me giggle.
Author's Response: Thanks Shan!! I loved the idea of her having Pam's hair and talent and Jim height...the idea made me giggle as well.
Date: October 03, 2006 05:48 am Title: Chapter 1
"Does Kurt's mom have her own train?" Wow, fluff and humor? I think I'm going to enjoy this ride!
Author's Response: I hope that you do! Thanks Par5!
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a fantastic distraction. I admit - I, too, am not usually a 'fan' of this genre, but you have me intrigued already! Pam getting all mad over Angela ... the case of Coca-Cola ... Mrs. Jane Halpert-Schrute... hahaha... I assume you are continuing this. Because we have to know more!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it. Ditto. I'm not one for stories with alot of original characters. Takes me too far away from the show but this challenge was too good to pass up.
More will arrive as soon as I can manage. I promise!
9 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 05:17 am Title: Chapter 1
This is adorable. I particularly like that Pam and Angela still don't quite see eye to eye.
Author's Response:
Thanks Lis! I decided to go with something a little more subtle - and Angela's giving us more and more reason to find her unreasonable by the second.
Not to say Jim's going to be at all happy when he finds out what's going on. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 05:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Bwah! This was great.
She didn't laugh when he told her he'd never been allowed to try Jell-O.
Although she did laugh when he told her his father called it "the instrument of the devil."
I had to stop reading at that point; I was laughing too hard. Loved the Dwangela/Jam traits that were evident in their offspring.
As always, great story.
Author's Response:
HEE! That was the first line I thought of. It took me a while to simplify it. I'm not expecting this to become an epic saga. :)
I'm very glad to know you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 05:10 am Title: Chapter 1
What a great distraction from angst-a-palooza. Too funny. Not usually such a fan of the 'JAM meets in the sandbox' genre, but you pulled it off with finesse - plenty of wit to balance the cute. So many great bits - jello as 'the instrument of the devil' particularly got me.
And, BTW, I totally agree - after all the psychological and narrative analysis, the good TV keep-em-hanging logic...the vexing question remains: WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH HER? This is freaking Jim for god's sake. Stamford, Shmamford...I'd be all over him like a bad coat.
Author's Response:
I am dying a slow painful death. And it doesn't help that I'm working and for the last 2 wks have had to wait to download episodes on iTunes - and then find a way to sneak and watch. Priorities you know. ;)
Funny thing. I'm really not a fan of these type of stories either. I like my JAM straight up and uncomplicated - but I don't want to speculate and get my heart doubly broken. I needed something to distract myself.
All I know is Pam better smarten up cause the line of women waiting in the wings is getting longer by the minute. ;)