Date: July 30, 2009 09:46 pm Title: Unexpected
Glad to see you updating so quickly... Thanks! I have to say Season 3 was definately not my favorite - I hate seeing Jim acting so not like himself. If you want to fast forward to end of Season 3 or even Season 4 - that's ok with me. :)
Author's Response: thanks for this =)rni know season 3 was not his high point, but i'm building a climax here... lol
Date: July 27, 2009 06:06 pm Title: Unexpected
I like the way you've added the "behind the scenes" entries, in with what we already saw happen. I enjoy your style of writing too! Keep it up....Looking forward to reading what Jim was thinking when Pam gave him that big hug....
Author's Response: thanks for the tip! i'm definitely including that...
10 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2009 07:02 am Title: Unexpected
:( this is so sad! but it's good. i'm anxious to read more.
10 [Report This]Date: March 16, 2009 02:28 pm Title: Unexpected
I love the scene between Pam & Roy in Chapter 2. That's exactly what I imagine happened.
Great job!