10 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2009 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute indeed, and I'd not have known that was your first fanfic, it was really good =)
I love the whole bath challenge, but especially Jim being a Daddy at the same time, I find that extremelly cute!
You definitely need to write more =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I appreciate it! I love to write and now that I see that others like my work, fanfic looks like it'll be my new venue! Thank you again :)
Date: March 24, 2009 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
AWWWWWW I loved this story so much :)The way you described Jim and Pam was amazing, it actually felt like it was them! I hope you keep writing stories, because this one was awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind response! I have been reading stories here for a while but wasn't sure I could write well enough to post something. I'm glad you like it, that makes me very happy!
10 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2009 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aleja;lskjdflaksjf.
Sorry. That's how I usually review.
I already said all of this, but so so so so so so so cute!! I loved it. But you knew that already. Gah. I don't know why you were so nervous, because this really is terrific. Seriously.
And I'm glad to have helped out. =)
Author's Response: And now thank you for the real review. Now that I have been bitten by the writing bug, I am contemplating adding to it in the future. On the other hand I really like it just on it's own so maybe I will just start something new altogether...who knows!
Date: March 24, 2009 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
FINALLY, I've been sitting on MTT like all day hitting refresh, waiting on this to get up! I haven't even read it yet but I just wanted to be your first review!!
Squeeeeeee I'm so excited!!!
Author's Response: Awww, you're like my new best friend! I just had one little thing to fix before it got posted, hence the wait, but thank you for being my first review :)