Date: May 20, 2010 07:52 am Title: dreamland
Hey, kaat! The nice thing about a gap between updates is reading the story from the beginning again :) I love these two as you've written them and now this little baby, too. My favorite detail has to be the pink nail polish from an earlier chapter, but now there's the idea of the two of them so in love with Cecelia. Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2010 11:42 am Title: dreamland
This entire chapter melted me into a gooey pile. There's so many great lines that spoke to me, but the end was by far the best, starting from "I'm so proud of you." Great stuff, can't wait to read more!
Date: May 18, 2010 09:10 am Title: dreamland
This is very sweet, and you've captured their awe nicely without being maudlin. I laughed out loud at this line: “Those things are more amazing than I thought.”
So glad you got back to this. Lovely picture you've painted.
Date: May 17, 2010 11:16 pm Title: dreamland
Aw, I missed this! So glad to see you back with this. I especially loved his line about wanting as many as Pam would make him. Too sweet. :-)
Date: May 17, 2010 08:06 pm Title: dreamland
Aw, I love it :)