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Reviewer: impish1 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2008 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 10:The Secret/The Carpet
Date: January 17, 2008 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 10:The Secret/The Carpet
I loved this piece, and your uncanny ability to cast new light on Pam. You're real good at drawing a scene out, ie. Writing a workday from Pam's pov in 5000 words. I like that. I like the thought that Pam is conciously aware of her struggle between Jim and Roy, and I really think you capture her character.
I hope you decide this is worth finishing sometime. ;-)
Reviewer: Beaky22 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2007 09:05 am Title: Chapter 10:The Secret/The Carpet
Date: December 29, 2007 09:05 am Title: Chapter 10:The Secret/The Carpet
i really like this story.. its not often we get to see pams pov and i think you did a good job capturing it!
Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2006 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 10:The Secret/The Carpet
Date: October 31, 2006 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 10:The Secret/The Carpet
Great chapter. Can't wait for more.