7 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2009 07:41 pm Title: liberty
I'm sorry you don't really like this since I really do. As for constructive compliments, hmmm. Not sure what is constructive about my compliments but I really, really hope you continue this. Maybe you will like it more when you get to the "good parts" (wink, wink.)
Date: April 14, 2009 07:22 pm Title: liberty
I love this. I love that it's first person and that you're taking it so far away from the awfulness that really happened between the two of them and making it something happier. I also love that you keep it so in character, and are so realistic with Pam needing time and Jim understanding, like we all know he would. I can't wait to read part three!
Author's Response: I LOVE THE FIRST PERSON TOO! I'm not usually a fan of reading Office first person fics, but I've now written two, so. Merci to you as well! (I'm learning French, aha. Wish me luck.)