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Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28, 2006 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 27

Aw, geez. I feel so warm and melty inside! Although I did LOVE your/Pam's tirade against being a generic mom! This was just a really nice, loving portrait of Jim and his family. Now if we could merge your version of Larissa with Moxie's Oracle Mom and get her on the show tout de suite, we'd solve this Jim/Pam problem in no time. Thanks girl7!

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2006 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 17

Her best friend Jim was still there somewhere beneath the surface, but right now, the man in him was staring down at her

*dissolving*

Not just erotic, but ROMANTIC. Oooo.

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2006 11:53 am Title: Chapter 24

God. You are turning me into GOO.

I tried to review this. I owe it to you, honestly, for this fine work. But I can't. Maybe I can come back later, when my brain starts working again, and say something coherent.

But this chapter, and all the ones before it....guh.

You have written the sexiest Jim EVAH, girl. 

Reviewer: shmeggers Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2006 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

i think this is absolutely fantastic, the way you fleshed out the characters behind the scenes,and the pace of it were so believeable. I cannot wait for more chapters!

Reviewer: shadowfax Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2006 10:42 am Title: Chapter 16

THANK YOU for this!!!  i certainly dont see why pam should get all the blame - jim should have chosen a far better time to get up the courage than her ENGAGEMENT PARTY, of all places.

Reviewer: shadowfax Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2006 09:12 am Title: Chapter 2

WOW - i really really like the way you portray jim and karen.  i know alot of people hate her simply because they see has as an obstacle to the jam pairing, but i happen to think she's adorable, and your characterization of her is so wonderful - different from pam, clearly, yet lovable all the same.

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2006 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 26

LOVE IT!!!!!!! This is so how I imagine Jim's family being. I can't wait to read more about their Thanksgiving AND their wedding plans. Please say you've got plans to continue this for awhile. Us Jam fans need it these days. ::sigh::

Reviewer: Dashdashdot Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2006 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 26

God I love this story. I'm not usually a multi-chapter fic kind of girl, but I'll read anything you write. You are always so amazingly in-character! I don't care if you make this story fifty chapters, I'll keep reading :].

Reviewer: Agnus Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2006 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 26

This is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2006 06:26 am Title: Chapter 26

Girl7, don't hate the fluff. And I don't find this overly sweet and silly - it's nice that they have fears about meeting the other's family, that Jim still has his insecurities about whether or not Pam is really ready for a commitment, and what has 2 thumbs and loves Jim Halpert? Old ladies! Nice!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2006 05:33 am Title: Chapter 26

Sweeter than pumpkin pie :o)  Since we didn't get a Halloween episode this year, we definitely need a Thanksgiving one!  Love the family dynamics you've captured here.  

Reviewer: cocare2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2006 04:51 am Title: Chapter 26

So. "She had to go home to Newton to see her family" kind of nearly made me fall off my bed. I know it's where John and BJ are from, but it's also my hometown, so seeing it in a fic was the most surreal experience ever. Seriously - until BJ and John did the Office, NO ONE was from Newton (except, like Matt LeBlanc, but he really hated it, so it doesn't quite count).

Er. Anyway. Just thought I'd share my incredible sort of "ohmigod" moment.

Also - kind of adorable. Oh, Jim. =D 

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2006 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is awesome, perfect for a rainy day, kind of like hot cocoa with whipped cream and a sprinkling of angst. Delicious!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2006 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 25

That was too funny.

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2006 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 25

giving her a casual smile as if he hadn’t trailed his tongue down her belly two hours earlier.

*zing!!!!* I love it when you do that....

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2006 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 25

Yes! Happy place is good! Stay in your happy place and keep us angst free for a few days. And who doesn't love Jim the fearless, defending young ladies from insects of all kinds.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2006 09:27 am Title: Chapter 25

Wonderful update.  So sweet...and hot, of course.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for always being so great about reviewing!  I'm in a happy place with Jim/Pam, so I think I'm going to continue this one for a few more chapters.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: Kath Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2006 06:48 am Title: Chapter 1

That was a nice read over the morning coffee.  Thanks!  But I have a question.  Are Jim & Pam engaged?  Or did they just talk about it.  It seemed that there was this proposal, but then nothing more has really been said about.  Was it just hypothetical and I took it the wrong way?

Author's Response:

Hey kath! Yes, they are engaged - that's what she was alluding to in the previous chapter when she said, "I meant what I said last night."  Though it was vague, and I can completely see why it'd be confusing.  I've tried to downplay it a little to make way for a bigger proposal - or rather, re-proposal - later on.  :o) (Not that there's anything wrong with Jim in his underwear, seriously....)

 

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2006 05:33 am Title: Chapter 25

On the kitchen counter?!?!?! I'm shocked. Ahem. (Stop rolling your eyes!) Thanks for this nice bit o' fluff to have with my morning coffee. Happy now.



Author's Response: Okay, see, I wasn't consciously planning that they'd go at it on the kitchen counter, but now that you mention it... :o) Such a shocking, shocking thing, that!  Thanks as always for the review -

Reviewer: tizzy Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2006 10:40 am Title: Chapter 24

Wow, aww I was a little poor Roy over here, but umm in the end he's gonna have to let go....please tell me that you're gonna write up to at least the reveal of Jim and Pam? This story is becoming my favorite fic, I would disclose how often I've read it but umm I lost count after like 10....anyway love all you're stuff and I can't wait to see where you go with this....

PS-Um  "Just so you know...you still owe me sex in the conference room.

hehe

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for being such a great reviewer - you're always so good about giving feedback!  :o)

 

And to answer your question: Yeah, I think I'm going to continue with this for a little while - definitely up to the reveal, though I don't know how that'll happen yet.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2006 06:41 am Title: Chapter 24

I think you did a great job of showing how she is still connected to Roy yet loves Jim.

Author's Response: And you do such a great job of always giving feedback - I so appreciate that, seriously.  :o)

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2006 06:36 am Title: Chapter 24

Smut, yes. Smut good! No, I really liked you having her face up to Roy and letting him know it was over. Now she needs to tell him she's with Jim and the sex is better! Hee! I'm so cruel to Roy... But you were gentle! TWSS.

Author's Response: Heh heh heh.  :o) Poor Roy - I'm a sucker for the sad eyes, I guess. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2006 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 23

Pardon for the comparison, but if Dwight and Angela can have a secret relationship at the office, which only we the viewers are privy to, I hope Jim and Pam's, if secret, will be just as hot as what you've presented here.

Author's Response:

That makes two of us!  Thank you so much for being such a consistent reviewer - feedback is the best.  :o)

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2006 11:49 am Title: Chapter 23

Awesome. This chapter was great, as usual. Can't wait for 5:15! And this?

"He’d begun by making each of them lift a heavy box of paper, coaching them to lift with their legs and not their backs."

Cute nod to the UK Office!



Author's Response: Would you believe that I didn't do that on purpose?  I'd love to claim that I did, but.... I've only seen the UK version once, and it was all in two days over the holidays last year, so the details are fuzzy.  But I'm glad there's a link here, unintentional or not!  Thank you so much, BTW, for all your thoughtful reviews!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2006 09:12 am Title: Chapter 23

I love playful Jim and Pam.  Counting the hours till tonight for the real thing but it won't be as good as your fic.

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