Date: October 14, 2006 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 14
What!?! You're leaving us here? We need dancing/smut/fluff.
Date: October 14, 2006 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
You are a machine this weekend. Wow. Great chapter but dare I say more please?
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 13
this chapter was great, can't wait for some Jim/Pam interaction :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
aww so cute!! cannot wait till the dinner party thing :)
Date: October 14, 2006 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh my, do you have a pic of that dress somewhere. I want to see it. I can't wait for the party
Date: October 14, 2006 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 12
Yup, still good. And from the world of great minds think alike...I'm just finishing a story I started posting and part of it also focuses on a girly-girl friendship with Kelly. I guess that's not such a stretch, but still...Anyway, keep it coming, please!
Date: October 14, 2006 08:57 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh Jim. When is he going to believe eveyone that tells him that she loves him?
Date: October 14, 2006 08:53 am Title: Chapter 10
Yay she's gone. Thank you for that.
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 02:07 am Title: Chapter 10
Her throat was still aching from reading his email when her phone rang.
For some reason I find this sentence perfect. Maybe because I've never found this detail brought up in a any fic, and it's just... so true. The hurting throat has happened to me all too many times.
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 02:05 am Title: Chapter 9
Ha! It's not Alaska, but I can live with that:)
Date: October 13, 2006 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wow, thanks for all the updates today! I love the Jon/Pam kiss/hug, because what better way to wake Jim up, right? And poor defeated Jim. Pam really needs to take a step forward, like, yesterday.
Date: October 13, 2006 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 11
I'm in awe at how quickly you can write! Wonderful chapters this evening. Bye, Karen!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
wow, thanks for all these new chapters tonight!
Date: October 13, 2006 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
Aww, I love that Jon tried to make Jim jealous, and it worked!! Also totally love the last line. Can't you stay up a wee bit longer and update? You can sleep in tomorrow, right? (Sleep is over-rated anyway!)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 11
Um. Reposting to prove that I can spell interested. Obviously Jonathan was not intested in Pam. I don't know what that is, but it sounds repulsive. Clearly, I should go to bed, too.
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 11
Aaargh! Why do you have to sleep? Why?
This is awesome. The last scene when Jonathan suggests he might possibly be intested in Pam, and Jim's reaction? I was actually breathless. I think my heart rate picked up:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
Whoo! Three chapters all at once! And it's only Friday, and I think you said your husband was gone all weekend! Yay! (for the fic, nothing against your husband:))
Such sadness! And it is awesome, as usual. More, more!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 10
Beautiful writing. I am soooo into this story. Wow! Please give us the next chapter asap! Must have my fix. . . .
Date: October 13, 2006 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
Awesome. That last sentence was so poignant. Role reversal fully realized. And perfect! More, more, more. Please.
Date: October 13, 2006 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love how you're spending your evening entertaining us. Another awesome chapter, you have everyone's voice down so well! Michael trying to make the announcement sounded just like him. (But why can't she leave now, why wait till next week - ack.) I love how Jon is encouraging Pam not to give up.
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
Totally loved this chapter. Goodbye Karen, don't let the door hit you on your way out.
PS I think you meant eyes in this sentence:
Her ice were hard as flint, lips a firm line.
Author's Response:
Hee, kaystar - I had to take a break from the writing to thank you for pointing that out! I've had wine, but not that much -- I'm just posting as soon as I get them done, so I'm proofreading quickly. :o)
Thanks as always for being such a great reviewer!
Date: October 13, 2006 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
I just love this: "Oh my God, it's PAM!?" That is freaking awesome!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 9
goodbye, Karen! :)
Date: October 13, 2006 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yay! The cat is out of the bag:) Really wonderful work. You have such a gift for dialogue.
Date: October 13, 2006 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG, this is great stuff. Hope you have a really productive weekend!!!!