8 [Report This]Date: January 03, 2010 09:32 pm Title: My Hopes Are So High
wow. this was really good.
listening to the song while reading gave it a little extra something :)
and i must say, i like jim with a little cursing. pottymouth jim is sexy (; although which jim isnt.
so i'm definitely gonna think of this and smile every time i hear that song now (: great job!
Date: April 30, 2009 03:18 pm Title: My Hopes Are So High
Loved, loved, loved it. I never get sick of reading different versions of what these two characters were thinking during this chapter in their story. Well done.
10 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2009 03:10 pm Title: My Hopes Are So High
You hit it out of the ball park again!! I loved reading Jim's POV here, and especially loved:
"He was ready for the interview, completely mentally prepared when he realized who the one too many was. And he realized that being with the other was where he needed to be."
Awesome job!!!
10 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2009 01:58 pm Title: My Hopes Are So High
lovely.
plain ol, lovely (:
Date: April 30, 2009 11:14 am Title: My Hopes Are So High
This is so awesome. The first chapter was good,but the second was even better, and I have to admit that I was skeptical at the idea of adding to a one shot (which in my opinion rarely ends well) but you pulled it off beautifully. It probably doesn't hurt that I don't think I'll ever get enough first date fic either. ;) It's lovely the way it stands now, but if you wanted to continue this, I would be very eager to read it.
Date: April 30, 2009 06:17 am Title: My Hopes Are So High
Such a treat. Happy to read Jim's point of view.
Date: April 29, 2009 10:21 pm Title: My Hopes Are So High
Absolutely LOVE this line:
Maybe she’d throw him against the door and kiss him like she meant it and let him know that the past was the past and that her future was his.