Date: June 05, 2009 10:16 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
This is great ... and I'm so pleased you didn't make her run from one to another. She does need that time on her own. Loving your writing (I'm reading all of your stories at present!).
Author's Response: Yeah, I don't like the ones that transition too quickly from Roy to Jim. She would need a little time to mourn that relationship. Thanks so much for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2009 04:29 am Title: Kicking for the Surface
Fantastic chapter, JAMhands! Awwww, poor Pam. I feel so bad for her. Looking forward to an update. :)
Author's Response: Thanks BBoJ ;)
10 [Report This]Date: June 01, 2009 06:56 am Title: Kicking for the Surface
Can't wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: Thanks Liv!
10 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2009 08:19 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
ahhhh! please write more! this is great!
although pam is annoying me a bit right now, but that's exactly what pam would do! go you! (:
Author's Response: Hah! Thank you. She'll get better, I promise!
10 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2009 07:56 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
I usually try to leave comments for every chapter of a multi-part story, but I was too caught up in this to stop! I love your characterizations, here, your use of details we got later in the "real" timeline (Jim's tendency to burst forth unexpectedly, for example), and your deft use of sentence structure and word choice. This is an AU that feels real, because we know that in many respects, this is exactly what happened, emotionally if not in the actions. Lovely, lovely.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for such a lovely review. I am so happy that you are enjoying it, I love trying to crawl into the characters' heads.
10 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2009 05:04 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
Ahhhhh. Love this so much! I love the Jim and Pam moment when he picked her up. Gah. So goooood. Great work.
Author's Response: Ahhh. So happy that my owner is happy! Thanks Junkie!
Date: May 30, 2009 08:25 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
Another fine chap, JAMhands, full of tension and uncertainty. Great job describing Pam's departure, Roy's cluelessness and Jim's anxiety. Looking forward to the next installment already!
Author's Response: Thanks Nan! I wanted them to all be in different places in this chapter, so I'm glad that it came through for you! I appreciate you!
10 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2009 05:55 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
wow (:
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2009 03:21 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
This is amazing. I can't wait to see where you go with it :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll get going on it, my owner is a slave driver!