Date: June 19, 2009 09:49 pm Title: Clinging to a Preserver
This story is absolutely excellent in its authenticity. You make everything feel so very real, and it's subtle but powerful at the same time...just like Jim and Pam.
I can't wait for another installment!
10 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2009 07:05 pm Title: Clinging to a Preserver
Perfection. Total perfection. I love that Jim and Pam are sort of kind of talking, and I love that Pam is slowly but surely starting to realize what she wants and deserves! And aww, Jim! And Michael! PRICELESS! Awesome work as usual!
Date: June 08, 2009 02:47 pm Title: Clinging to a Preserver
I liked this chapter. I think you did a good job of building the tension that Jim was feeling. I hope Pam doesn't try to be an island unto herself for TOO long.
Date: June 08, 2009 09:44 am Title: Clinging to a Preserver
Great chapter! I really liked Pam's interactions with her mom. I liked how the conversation between Jim and Pam flowed. It seemed very natural.
Looking forward to your next update!
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2009 10:45 pm Title: Clinging to a Preserver
YAAAAAAAAAAAY an update and a freaking great one at that. I never have anything useful or constructive to say, so I'll just tell you again how awesome I think this is. I love how Pam knows he's there and waiting patiently, and he knows she just needs time, but it's all still so exciting... omg I LOVE this more than you know -)
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2009 03:07 pm Title: Clinging to a Preserver
Excellent chapter, JAMhands!!
And he had clung to that buoy all night long, bobbing along on waves of hope that he had dared not ride before. ~ Loved this!
Thanks so much for the update!!! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2009 01:44 pm Title: Clinging to a Preserver
lovely (: