Date: July 14, 2017 05:43 pm Title: Holy Water
This story makes my heart so happy. It rings so very true, and makes me feel like I am truly in the middle of the action. How do you do that?
I am so very late to this party, but Pam and Jim make my heart soar. This story really takes my breath away.
10 [Report This]Date: June 30, 2009 09:50 am Title: Holy Water
“I’m going to kiss you, Beesly. I’m gonna kiss you so hard you’re gonna wish you had never laid eyes on Leonardo DiCaprio,” he growled threateningly into the phone.
“Where are you?”
That? That is sexy, right there. I love this. I love their late-night, When Harry Met Sally type phone calls, and the reason Pam had kept him at arms-length, and how it all just came together. This is good. I loved this from top to bottom, congratulations on a triumph!
“About four blocks away.”
Date: June 29, 2009 07:27 am Title: Holy Water
Excellent job, JAMhands. I'm sorry it's done! I really enjoyed reading this. The start to this chapter was particularly great. Being raised Catholic, I feel Jim's pain about lent. Very clever. The bed-time phone calls were a great way to bring them closer while keeping them feeling secure. Well done! *claps*
P.S. Thanks to JamJunkie for sharing you!
Date: June 28, 2009 10:34 pm Title: Holy Water
Thanks so much for sharing this story! I loved it. Great job. =)
10 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2009 09:54 pm Title: Holy Water
Okay, this was freaking fantastic. The perfect ending to the perfect story. I wonder if they woke the landlady after that one? ;) Do you know the landlady? She sounds familiar...
Anyway. Loved the banter, loved the ending... loved it all! Excellent job, thanks so much for this fantastic story! :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2009 06:38 pm Title: Holy Water
oh my god.
you killed me (:
Date: June 28, 2009 05:11 pm Title: Holy Water
This was awesome. You are awesome and you never disappoint! It is amazing how you can consistently turn out such great stories! Can't wait to see what you write next. Don't keep us waiting too long!!
Date: June 28, 2009 11:27 am Title: Holy Water
Great ending! I love the whole discussion of the different meanings of abstinence. The chapter really builds up speed as it goes on and you can feel them sort of hurtling on toward the physical encounter they've both been craving.
I liked how your Pam refused to be pushed around, too. The interchange with Darryl in the last chapter was perfect.
Thanks for posting!
10 [Report This]Date: June 27, 2009 11:25 pm Title: Holy Water
How do you do it EVERYTIME? Seriously you kill me... this chapter was amazing. I have loved this story since the beginning, but it just got better and better with each chapter. I'm sort of sad it's now over lol. I love all the movie references, that is so them =)
What you working on nowwwwwww? lol
10 [Report This]Date: June 27, 2009 10:06 pm Title: Holy Water
::claps hands wildly:: LOVED IT!!
Date: June 27, 2009 08:40 pm Title: Holy Water
OMG, this was wonderful. Perfect. The interchanges are so well written. The Lent analogy, the Titanic teasing...
I especially loved this part:
“You’re too important to me,” Pam said bluntly, unwilling to be distracted by his soft chuckles and the husky timbre of his voice. “You are so important.”
Jim blinked up at his ceiling, wondering if his breastbone could withstand the beating his hammering heart was inflicting. “You’re, uh, everything,” he managed to croak. “I meant what I said, Pam, I’d save you first.”
“It‘s not up to you to save me,” she said, her voice softly vehement.
Date: June 27, 2009 08:34 pm Title: Holy Water
YAAAYYY! Oh, I've been wanting them to kiss for way too many chapters. That was excellent - loved the lent analogy. And now I want a Hostess cupcake.