Date: January 11, 2021 11:58 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm so glad you wrote a baseball story! I'm from a baseball family; my brother, Mike, was the shortstop the Brewers held over Robin Yount's head when he wanted to go be a professional golfer. Mike never made it to the show, but it set him up for a successful life.
Date: May 22, 2009 09:48 am Title: Chapter 2
Not a particularly huge baseball fan, but I'm really enjoying this. I'm intrigued to learn where you're going with it.
Date: May 21, 2009 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm really enjoying this. I like the way you're cutting back & forth through time, building your backstory. I'm not a baseball fan, but it wasn't hard to follow at all. Looking forward to more.
Date: May 21, 2009 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for indulging me in the first section there. I know. I'm like a freaking broken record. :)
The part with Jim and Pam is incredibly sweet and just delightful.
And as you well know - you'll get no complaints from me re: baseball.
Really lovely all around.
Date: May 21, 2009 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really enjoy this story so far. Please continue. It's intriguing and different and I feel a real connection to all the characters (including the new ones you made up!)