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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2009 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ah, but the poor baby was still concieved illegitamately, and well, means that Bean is destined for hell, at least if all my Sunday School teachers had anything to say about it. Or ya know, whatever stereotypical Sunday School teachers said, because really, I tuned out about 99% of what my real teachers said.

Author's Response:

I know.  Poor baby. 

But Angela really shouldn't talk.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2009 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 4

Cop out!!

Just kidding. I know what you mean- I love to write spec, but I don't always want to have to be wrong! Anyway, whenever, however it happens, this is how she'll feel about it, so it is undeniably true. Beautiful, as usual.



Author's Response:

Whatever.  :)    That's the thing.  I knew I'd end up taking liberties here (see latest chapter) but this is one thing I want to let the writers handle.  I could make it elaborate and I know they'll make it simple and vice versa.

Thank you for your continued support.  It is very much appreciated.

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2009 10:44 am Title: Chapter 4

What, you're passing up the opportunity to write up their wedding?  I'm shocked. 

These are such fun.  I smile when I read them.  The Pam-like mix of humor and sentimentality is right on.  I can hear her voice in the letters. 



Author's Response:

I am.  Consider me 30% more unpredictable.

I have my own ideas of what the wedding will/could be but I'm not in the mood to be wrong about it when it finally happens.  So I took a different direction - one that focused more on the meaning behind their wedding than the event itself. 

Smiling is good.  And hearing Pam's voice is even better.  Thanks. :)

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2009 08:18 am Title: Chapter 4

I'm finally posting here.  This is so perfect!  I love how you have captured all the emotions a mom to be is feeling.  That last chapter was brillant.



Author's Response: Thanks kh!!   I'm so happy you liked it!   Thanks for stopping by. :)

Reviewer: Liv Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2009 08:05 am Title: Chapter 4

I love the ending!
"Bonus! This also means you no longer have a chance of being born illegitimately. It's a good day to be you Bean.... Really. You have absolutely no chance no matter what Angela might have to say about it."
haha!! Awesome!

Author's Response:

Hee!  You know Angela will have something to say about it. 

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2009 05:55 am Title: Chapter 4

Holy inspiration, Batman!  Another one?!  Wow!  Not a cop out at all, xoxoxo, I think you handled the wedding just fine, just touching on it rather than spelling it out.  Pam's love for this baby and for Jim just pops off the page.  I'm feeling all swoony :) *sob* and *hiccup*

Author's Response:

Yeah I know.  I had a lot of time on my hands. ;) Glad to know you liked it.  I had this whole other letter in mind but realized I didn't want to go into details about the wedding at all - just sort of what Pam was thinking that day you know?

I guess you do - since you sort of said so. LOL!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2009 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 4

YAY they gots married!!! loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: adampascalfan12 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2009 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 4

Loved her deep, real feelings of how not to let go of someone special and making bad mistake in our lives, there's a chance to make it up that mistake and be happy again. I loved it! =)

Author's Response: So glad!!  I think J+P know how that feels best of all. :)

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