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Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2009 11:10 am Title: we work our way around each other

"Please just give me a fucking sign."  Callisto...I like your style!  That was great!

Author's Response: Thanks, Mr Bill! Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2009 11:05 am Title: we work our way around each other

P.S.  Oh, man!  How could I forget the sharing of the chocolate bar?!  That?  Wow.  It makes me think of when I would re-read the end of The Outsiders again and again 'cause I knew it would make me cry every time, know what I mean?  It's that good.

Author's Response: Would it surprise you to know that was the easiest, quickest part of the whole chapter to write? No? These two belong together. :)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2009 11:00 am Title: we work our way around each other

Excellent.  Pushy-ass Karen digging her claws in would totally explain how that week unfolded.

I hope Pam & Jim did it like bunnies to exorcise the spirit of evil Karen practically date-raping Jim. 

Feel free to explain any more mysteries of the workings of Jim's mind, particularly if the M rating doesn't involve Karen at all.  



Author's Response: Well, I like to think they did it like bunnies just...because they could. ;) You know, I kind of liked Karen. She was in the way, obviously, but she was just trying to hang on to Jim. What girl wouldn't do what it took to make that happen? Thanks for reviewing, lisahoo. It's always great to hear from you. :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2009 10:58 am Title: we work our way around each other

Callisto, this was delicious.  I've got so much swirling around in my head right now, I just don't know what I could say that would properly convey how unbelievably great this is.  From now on, this is what I choose to believe happened during that week.  The encounter in the grocery store just about killed me dead--so heartbreaking.  Most of all, my heart was just bleeding for Pam. 

I don’t know what to do. Please just give me a fucking sign. Please.

Ugh.  I'm a mess. 

Thanks for the new addition to my favorites.  It will join its older brothers and sisters :)



Author's Response: Hey, Nan! Thank you! This was hard to write and I sat on it and tinkered around with it forever. I'm glad you liked it. In answer to your question-- I think it's the company I'm keeping. :)

Reviewer: Inanna3 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2009 09:53 am Title: we work our way around each other

This was absolutely wonderful. I loved following Jim's thoughts and seeing how he desperately tried to be all things to all people, until he was simply stretched too taut. This is one of those stories that is going to slide so smoothly into canon for me, I'll forget we never saw it on the show.

 

Thanks for writing it.



Author's Response: Thanks, Inanna. Jim's so hard to figure out during this week, trying to hang on to what he had while contemplating what he might have been offered... glad you enjoyed it. :)

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