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Reviewer: Liv Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2009 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

And then he wished, with all his heart, that the silhouette coming from it was her.

That was a really lovely line. Might I suggest, though, that you maybe fix the paragraphs? Like, add spaces between them? it makes it a little hard to read. :)

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