Reviews For "It's Too Soon"
Reviewer: bkwrm Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2009 06:01 pm Title: 5:06 AM
Date: August 16, 2009 06:01 pm Title: 5:06 AM
Dr. McNulty & Nurse Mindi sound wonderful! I enjoyed the Jim and Pam's bantering and lightheartedness of this chapter. I have a feeling you're lulling us into complacent before hitting us with the serious stuff.
Author's Response: yes.... yes i am. it all ends happily though.
Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2009 05:27 pm Title: 5:06 AM
Date: August 15, 2009 05:27 pm Title: 5:06 AM
So far the best chapter yet, you're writing them so perfectly in character that I can see it all in my head =)
I hope they stop her contractions - ohhhhhh the drama :)