10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2011 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yay, yay, yay! Just how it should ave been. She made the move, and said what needed to be said.
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was such a beautiful reunion. The dialogue was so real and so them. Totally loved this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:) I really appreciate it!!
9 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was one of the simplest plots I've seen, and yet one of the most effective. No hemming and hawing, just them, saying they're sorry and moving on. Great read.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. So glad you enjoyed it:)
Date: October 12, 2006 07:26 am Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for fixing this fiasco in such a great way!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's always fun to shape things differently when you get frustrated:)
7 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 06:38 am Title: Chapter 2
Ah, very satisfying!
Author's Response: Thanks, shan. Appreciate it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 06:19 am Title: Chapter 2
Wonderful
Author's Response: You are sweet. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 05:12 am Title: Chapter 2
This definitely left me satisfied and smiling. The dialogue carried the moment perfectly. The only thing I don't like about it is that it's over...part 3 perhaps?
Author's Response:
Well, I'm so glad you liked it! I'll see what I can do:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 04:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Sigh. Just beautiful (I have the chills to prove it) and so realistic. You've got their voices down - and the poignancy of what this meeting would be like (feeling awkward for a second - handshake or hug?). Wow. I'm really sorry this is over.
Perhaps you could continue it....write another.....?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I really appreciate it:) This was the most dialogue I've done and I was really nervous about it. I'll definitely see what tonight's episode brings for inspiration:)
Date: October 12, 2006 04:14 am Title: Chapter 2
Very, very nice.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it:)
8 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 02:40 am Title: Chapter 2
So sweet! I loved Jim rubbing her (empty!) ring finger.
Author's Response: Thank you! I did, too. I thought it was something he would be fascinated with after all those years.
7 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 01:51 am Title: Chapter 1
I wish I could write dialogue that flowed this easily. Well done. I love the "Yeah. I need you to look up." What a great gotcha moment!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I usually try to avoid this much dialogue. Glad you enjoyed it:)
8 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 12:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Yay - nice and sweet and *sigh* Jam!!
Author's Response:
Sigh, indeed. I need more *sigh* moments onscreen! Thanks for your review:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2006 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
Eeeekkk I NEED this to happen. This was perfect. I have "Goodbye My Lover" playing and the combination is making me cry like a little girl. Amazing job, bitterpill. Just...perfect.
Author's Response:
I need this, too. I miss my Jam moments! And I love that song...it's so sad. Thanks for the review:)
Date: October 11, 2006 06:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Can you make this really happen? Like now? Pretty please?
Author's Response:
Don't I wish! Will have the 2nd part soon:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
so great! i didn't expect that ending at all!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love their conversation - and I'm intrigued by the last line. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great job. So simple, yet so engrossing. More please!
Author's Response: Thank you! 2nd part will be up soon.
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 11:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Well that sounds promising. Now we need more.
Author's Response: Very soon! I promise:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 08:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Gave me the biggest chill, made me stop chewing my sesame chicken on the spot. This is excellent - so true to their voices, so understated and realistic. God. Could you please storm the NBC lot where they're filming and force them to make this happen on the show?
Seriously - sheer brilliance, this. Love it! Will there be more....?
Author's Response:
You are too kind:) Glad you are enjoying it. Hope to get Part 2 up this evening.
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 07:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I love the simplicity of this, and you have their voices down so well that it works.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Appreciate it.
8 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 06:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Look up, Jim! *searches in vain for second chapter*
More, please :)
Author's Response: Ha! Chapter 2 should be up tonight. Thanks for your patience:)
9 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 05:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh! Cliffhanger!
I like this dialog-only style. It sounds like them.
Author's Response:
Yes, a cliffhanger. My first. I'm very nervous. Thanks for the review:)
Date: October 09, 2006 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
SQUEAL - that was fantastic! Woo!
Author's Response: You are very sweet. Thanks for the review:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2006 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay! Was not expecting that last line--it's perfect! I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hope to have the 2nd part up tonight.
10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2006 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this! More please :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Look for Part 2 tonight:)