1 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2018 01:54 pm Title: Part One: The Dundies
This is amazing. It's a real rollercoaster but you pull it off beautifully.
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2009 07:22 am Title: Part One: The Dundies
Hi! I've been reading fanfiction for 1 year, as I remember. But I've never read such story!!! I mean the story is so amusing and the characters are so.... real! I'm so grateful to you for this!
Also I'm looking forward for what will happen in Stamford, hope you'll continue. =)
P.S. don't blame me for differenrent mistakes, if there is any (I hole you'll forgive the girl from Russia)
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for taking the time to review, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! :) And I definitely won't hold any mistakes against you. I speak the language and make a ton of them all the time. Thanks again!
Date: September 16, 2009 05:21 pm Title: Part One: The Dundies
This was such a creatuve story - I really liked it. I would love to see you handle the Season 3 Karen stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind words, I really appreciate it. I do have a plan for season three, but it may have to wait a little while. Want to get that other pesky WIP finished first. But stay tuned! Thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2009 04:39 pm Title: Part One: The Dundies
I loved this. LOVED this. First of all, The Dundies is my all-time favorite Office episode, that alone made this a real treat. But mostly, I'm so impressed with the little details and the fact that Pam and Jim are still in-character, even though they're playing a character. Good stuff/ Pam. :D
Author's Response: I love the Dundies too! One of my all-time favorites. I can tell you how much fun it was to write around the scenes in that episode and I'm so glad JAM still seems real to you. I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it, thank you so much! :)
Date: September 05, 2009 03:17 am Title: Part One: The Dundies
What an intriguing idea! I love the little details you twist around: Pam's guitar, the invitation addressed to Jim ... It's late or I'd write more.
Looking forward to S3!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks VB, I really try hard to incorporate little details of the show into my stories. Thanks for taking a moment to review, even if it was late. I really appreciate it! :)
Date: September 04, 2009 07:06 pm Title: Part One: The Dundies
OMG I'm so stressed for Pam right now!!! And Jen? Needs to be bitch slapped.
Author's Response: Yeah, Jen's not much of a compassionate person, huh. But if she was nice, I'm not sure there'd be much of a story. Anyway, thanks so much for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it! :)
Date: September 04, 2009 06:14 pm Title: Part One: The Dundies
This is such a cool story. I love the spin you pit on our favorite office couple. Plus, you easily make events in the show happen in ways so they perfectly fit in your story. Keep it up!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind words. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I love putting in all the tiny details from the show, so I'm glad they're working for you. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: September 04, 2009 06:07 pm Title: Part One: The Dundies
Wow, Pam! How long did it take you to write this?! All the little details are pretty impressive. I hate Jen, and she's not even on the show : D She had me feeling so angry! As I was reading this, I was having little flashes of The Dundies. Nice knowing that Jim got to go home to Pam :) Interested to see where you take this.
Author's Response: Hi Nan, thanks for the review, I really appreciate it! It took me over a month to write the whole story. Still editing the last part. Glad the Dundies came in clear for you, means it the story works as it should. :) Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2009 05:05 am Title: Part One: The Dundies
I really like the clever original approach you've put to it. Looking forward to Casino Night
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! :) Hopefully Casino Night doesn't disappoint.
10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2009 11:03 pm Title: Part One: The Dundies
Okay I forgot how much I LOVED the first chapter of this, and this one was even better. Are you going to continue it?
It was so well written and I really feel for Jim and Pam aw :(
Author's Response: Ah, thanks Sally, I always appreciate your support! :) The whole thing is finished, just a matter of getting it ready to post. I believe I'll post a part every week. (there are only 3)
9 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2009 07:41 pm Title: Part One: The Dundies
Superb!! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)