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Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2009 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great job. I loved the words you put in Jim's mouth when telling Pam how he felt about her. I think I'll print them and place them in a special place to glance at from time to time. Oh, how I wish he had said them on that night. Very nicely written.

Reviewer: TheDrinkOfTheWiseMan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2009 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE this! Jims speech to Pam made me tear up! It was beautifully written, bravo!

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2009 04:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh what  might have been.  I remember having had such high hopes for something "happening" between Jim and Pam at Phyllis' wedding...something to get them back on the right track...and back to each other.  Something so much like what you have given us in this story.  Nice job! 

Reviewer: Annika Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2009 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved this!  I always thought there should be an "alternate ending" to PW, and here is the perfect one.  Great job! 

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