1 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2020 12:29 pm Title: Present
Kevin as Ghost of Christmas Present is also pretty inspired - and I love his appreciation of the strip club. Thank you for leaving what he was doing in the vicinity of that redhead undefined, though.
This is solid Roy-work, I think - just awful enough for you to want to shake Pam, not quite awful enough that Pam can't easily be like "oh, he's just saying he's already committed to me and he's just kidding about the other thing."
Author's Response: Thank you! I needed to make sure Pam saw what she needed to see, without making the choice too easy for her. And Kevin is hard to write, even as a vision!
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2006 08:33 am Title: Present
"Marrying for tax purposes" Awesome! That's exactly how romantic Roy is! And lecherous Kevin? Always a hoot!
Author's Response: I don't think Roy's a bad guy (I resisted the temptation to have him being reallyl naughty at his party), but not the right guy for Pam. And Kevin is just fun to write. :) Thanks so much!
9 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2006 07:30 am Title: Present
Your Kevin and Kelly voices are really good. Love how Kevin says colleague. Cracks me up. Nice situations to include in the Present, too.
Author's Response: I love writing both Kevin and Kelly. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 12:58 pm Title: Present
Ahhhhh! I love this! I'm forcing myself to review each chapter, even though I'm dying to get to the next one!
Loved the astral projection comment and Roy's characterization of why he was marrying her. So sad.
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't think Roy would be cheating on her or anything like that- but he's so clearly the wrong guy, you know? And this is why. Also, I admire your restraint. Love the multiple comments!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 12:47 pm Title: Present
“It’s not what you’re thinking, Pam, although that would rock."
Oh my. I have to pick myself from the floor and stop laughing if I want to be able read the next chapters:D
Author's Response: Kevin is so much fun to write. I hope you enjoy the rest, too!