10 [Report This]Date: March 22, 2010 12:04 pm Title: I don’t want some pretty face to tell me pretty lies
Finally being honest, I like it! Continuing...
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10 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2010 10:10 pm Title: I don’t want some pretty face to tell me pretty lies
There's one thing I love more than JAM smut and that is Jim and Pam on the same page. The universe aligned and all of that. Makes me happy :D
I like how straightforward both of them are in this chapter because c'mon, it really is that easy! Now I'm off to read the two epilogues.
Author's Response: One thing I can't stand from the show is that we never got to see Jim and Pam's first date. I so wanted to see the point where they really started being honest with each other. I love how, once they got past the whole mess, there's just been truth between them. I so wanted to see where that all began.
10 [Report This]Date: March 16, 2010 04:34 pm Title: I don’t want some pretty face to tell me pretty lies
I just loved this chapter! Great job, and it was so beautifully written. The conversation was perfect as were their mannerisms and body language. As sad as I am that you'll only have two short epilogues left for us, I really can't wait to read them!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story up to this point and I hope you'll enjoy how it wraps up.
10 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2010 06:49 pm Title: I don’t want some pretty face to tell me pretty lies
Say it ain't so! Over already?!? Seems too soon, but I am really looking forward to the epilogues you have planned.
Another job well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry if it seems short, but there just felt like a natural end point for this story. I'll look forward to your thoughts on the epilogues and hope to hear from you in the future. Thanks again for taking the time!
10 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2010 08:52 am Title: I don’t want some pretty face to tell me pretty lies
Okay, that was most definitely your best chapter ever. You told this story so beautifully. The "hit this," line was FANTASTIC, I could hear Jim's comeback. Spot on and I look forward to the epilogues - even though I'm sad this is almost over *sobs*
Author's Response: Thanks, Hannah, it's always great to hear from you. I hope you'll like how the story wraps up.
Date: March 15, 2010 07:39 am Title: I don’t want some pretty face to tell me pretty lies
A little honesty goes a long way, eh? Good one, ivy, and good call to not stretch it out, as much as I enjoy reading it. I'll look forward to seeing how this wraps up.
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan. I really tried to find ways to keep it going, but I couldn't come up with anything that wasn't hackneyed or trite. The natural end point for this story comes sooner than I might like, but the story tells me where it needs to go. Thanks so much for the support.