Date: March 11, 2010 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Okay, I thought I was going to hold off on this until it was finished because all these great angsty WIPs make me impatient. But this is just too good, and I caved. Moving onto chapter three.
Date: March 10, 2010 01:10 am Title: Chapter 2
This is soooo good :)
Date: March 09, 2010 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
This continues to be awesome. My favorite part:
"But he continues as his hands slip around into his pockets, and he keeps his gaze leveled somewhere at her shoulder. "I've been trying, you know?" He half-wonders of her, looking quickly into her face for a second to spy any agreement. She nods once, and he accepts with an inclination of his head. "It's just … it's been really, really hard. You … have no idea."
"I think I might," Pam dares softly, and she's startled by his sudden glance up. There's that confusion, that scrutiny. Like he's scouring her for the definition of a word that means everything. It's almost intrusive."
That's just plain wonderful.
Author's Response: I was really happy with that part, too. :D I could just imagine the 'intrusiveness' of his stare, since sometimes the way Jim would look at Pam ... it was like he was looking right into her effing soul. Which can be really startling, I think!
Thank you again for reviewing!
Date: March 09, 2010 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
Please continue this. I love the angst, but, please, at least let it end happily. 'K? Great job of putting a new spin on the disaster that was Phyllis' Wedding
Author's Response: Haha, fret not! I promise happiness and sunshine in the end. I'm still following what Season 3 gave us, but putting my own spin on things. :D
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2010 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is absolutely wonderful! You did such a good job describing the simmering anger beneath the surface. I thought I would DIE when Jim gave Karen the keys and told her to start the car & he'd be down in a minute. What an electric moment. I am VERY much looking forward to the next chapters!
Author's Response: The keys part is probably one of my favorites that I wrote. I'm so glad you're feeling it. Thanks so much for the review!!
Date: March 09, 2010 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. This is wonderful, I'm a real sucker for the angst and this is just perfect. You've got s3 Jim and Pam down wonderfully here. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: It's such a relief to hear that I'm nailing them (TWSS). Thanks for the review!!
Date: March 09, 2010 11:46 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like where this is going. Its a different move to write Jim & Pam as they head to the same destination but through a different route. Nice break away from the usual baby stuff.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I really like going back and seeing how things "could have been." One tiny change - Pam saying 'no' to Roy at Phyllis' wedding - could've made a world of difference. I'm trying to stick to what happened in Season 3, but put my spin on it for this story, so like you said: same destination, just a different route. ;)
Date: March 09, 2010 11:35 am Title: Chapter 2
Eeeeee still getting better! I totally loved everything about this chapter, especially this magnetic pull you created between Jim and Pam, especially with Karen there. Awesome, can't wait for more
Author's Response: Even though I love Karen and Jim Halpert was one of the luckiest guys ever to have her, there's no fighting the force between J&P. Thanks for your review!! :D
Date: March 09, 2010 08:03 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm so glad you're continuing; I love stories like this. As happy as I am that they're happy, I do love to wallow in the S3 angst, especially stories that move the action up and stretch the tension out. This is very well written and a believable break in the storyline - I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Happiness is the reward, but the angst is just so good, really. I'm glad it's not such a far-fetched idea; I really think it could've changed alot if Pam had just told Roy 'no' at Phyllis' wedding. Hopefully I can keep true to the season and characters! Thanks so much for reviewing. :)