10 [Report This]Date: March 26, 2010 08:10 am Title: Chapter 7
I do hope you write Jim's expression when he sees Pam. Another wonderful chapter, Mel. Can't wait for more!
Date: March 25, 2010 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 7
Your difficulty with Michael and Dwight didn't show at all. You're great with these characterizations, and the others, too. Continuing to love love love this story and your version of angst for season three. I can't wait for the second part of this episode.
Author's Response: Thank you very much again for your review!! Your reviews are such a boost, not only for what you say but the fact that I really enjoy your writing so much as it is!
Date: March 25, 2010 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
I thought you did an excellent job with Dwight and Michael. Also, it's either your good descriptive writing or my obsession, or both, that made me see exactly what face you are describing here: "Her attention falls quickly across to Jim, horror expressed eloquently through wide hazel eyes, and he obliges her with his signature stare of amusement-meets-surprise" I know that look exactly. Can't wait for the party to see the storm hit that you've got brewing here.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews, jazzfan! And as for Jim and his Jim Faces, there is so much he is capable of expressing in just one look, and it's hard to be descriptive enough to make sure a reader knows EXACTLY what he's saying with his expressions.
10 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2010 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
This keeps on getting better and better. I am so excited to see what happens next!
10 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2010 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
What a fantastic chapter! I can't wait to see the rest of cocktail night! And btw, Michael and Dwight were spot on, plus I loved Roy's reaction - but they're just so wrong for each other, he just liked looking at her... bad man.
Author's Response: Thank you, PMH! I really do like Roy, I can understand why Pam liked him in the first place, but they really did not work out for one another. But you can't blame him; who WOULDN'T just like looking at Pam when she's all gussied up? ;)
9 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2010 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
First off, let me say that seeing that this was updated merited my closing my office door so that I could read uninterrupted and without constantly looking over my shoulder ; )
Oh, I sure am liking this set up! I never would have guessed that you would have Pam accompany Michael. Great idea! Being a sucker for visuals, I love seeing what the dress looks like. Even before I read your notes, I thought your Michael and Dwight were perfect. Pam's comment about Jan hating her brings to mind the kitchen conversation in Dinner Party. I'm so excited!
Author's Response: Haha, I've been there, so how flattering to hear that someone ELSE does the same thing but to my fic! ;)
I loved the idea of throwing Pam into the party, and I'm glad you picked up on my reference to Dinner Party and Jan's dislike for Pam! As always, you're a fabulous reviewer, thank you so much Nan!!