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Reviewer: jslasb Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2010 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 9

I am sooooooooo glad you added that last paragraph. I think I would've died if you would've left off at "Jim, I just--"!!!!

Reviewer: albie_ Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2010 08:44 am Title: Chapter 9

Fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2010 10:22 am Title: Chapter 9

Woohoo!  Happy Saturday!  I've been dying for an update to this, Mel.  Such tension in this little roller coaster ride!  When Pam didn't get to speak her piece, I was so disappointed...and then she finds the wallet!  Wheeee!  Hands in the air and screaming :D  You go, Beesly!  And he kissed her!  He KISSED her.  What a masterful cliffhanger, you little tease.  Awesome how you keep the two of them in character while taking this alternate route.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2010 08:06 am Title: Chapter 9

Yay!!! Oh how I love this story!! Great great great! Can't wait for the rest!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2010 01:48 am Title: Chapter 9

That was BLOODY BRILLIANT. I have soooo excited about ths upate and you did not fail to amaze meeeeeee :)

I cannot wait to see what happens next. Don't leave us for heroes ;)

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