Date: April 21, 2010 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
I am sooooooooo glad you added that last paragraph. I think I would've died if you would've left off at "Jim, I just--"!!!!
Date: April 11, 2010 08:44 am Title: Chapter 9
Fantastic chapter!
Date: April 10, 2010 10:22 am Title: Chapter 9
Woohoo! Happy Saturday! I've been dying for an update to this, Mel. Such tension in this little roller coaster ride! When Pam didn't get to speak her piece, I was so disappointed...and then she finds the wallet! Wheeee! Hands in the air and screaming :D You go, Beesly! And he kissed her! He KISSED her. What a masterful cliffhanger, you little tease. Awesome how you keep the two of them in character while taking this alternate route.
Date: April 10, 2010 08:06 am Title: Chapter 9
Yay!!! Oh how I love this story!! Great great great! Can't wait for the rest!
Date: April 10, 2010 01:48 am Title: Chapter 9
That was BLOODY BRILLIANT. I have soooo excited about ths upate and you did not fail to amaze meeeeeee :)
I cannot wait to see what happens next. Don't leave us for heroes ;)