Date: September 13, 2010 06:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh this ficlet made my heart flutter. Thanks! Very well written.
Date: May 02, 2009 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
*Sigh* LOVE IT. Wonderfully written :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1
"...making the little muscles inside her ears flutter." - never read that one before...sounds like that was some kiss!
Author's Response: Hee, but it happens! You know that sound in your ears just when you start to yawn? kind of like that.
Thanks for the review!
Date: October 16, 2006 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
You are directly responsible for a frenzy of Casino Night watching today.
You should be incredibly proud of yourself. LOL!
Kidding aside - it was a really lovely description of such a sweet couple of kisses.
Sigh. Takes me back to happier times. :(
Date: October 16, 2006 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
WHAT TONGUE? Gotta go rewind....
Thanks for this..
Author's Response: Hehe yeah, the togue is realy hard to spot. I don't even know how I noticed it. And thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
This line said it all so beautifully - "It teased a little at her lips like he was taking a little taste, a little sip of her to quench his thirst, and the reaction in her stomach was like a storm- rushing, intense tingles that started in her middle, and shot up to her chest, pushing a sigh from her lungs, tightening her throat, and making the little muscles inside her ears flutter" You have a beautiful way of describing the feelings of the kiss.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love to know what parts of my stories that readers particularly enjoy.
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful job. It really takes you back to that glorious moment.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, gorgeous description of the kiss! I loved this line:
He could have devoured her slowly, savored her like a fine wine. She tasted like summertime, and he almost got lost in the warmth of her sunlight.
Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for being specific about a certain part that you liked!
9 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a beautiful description of the kiss. Hmm, I think maybe I'll go watch it again for the 789,474,239th time.
Author's Response: Thank you! And wow, you've watched the kiss more times than I have. ;o)
9 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 11:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. And how lovely that they are so attuned to each other.
Author's Response: Thank you so much ! :o)
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautifully written
Author's Response: Thank you! I was worried about posting it up because I was afraid people wouldn't like it. So, thanks so much for your review!