Reviews For The Gift
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Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2010 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 3

::claps wildly::  Awesome, Bill!  I loved it--from start to finish.  The little details were beautiful.   “Thank you so, so much...for everything!”  xo



Author's Response: Oh, Nan...you're making me blush!  But seriously, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it and even more thrilled to have been asked to be a part of this little gift for you.  As so many others have so eloquently put it, you have been such an enthusiastic and constant supporter of not only mine, but all our efforts as we try to express our enjoyment and love for this show through the stories we write.  And that has, in no small measure, been so helpful and encouragiing, especially on those days when the words and ideas just don't fly from the keys.  So to be able to do this for you was truly, both a treat and an honor.  So thank you!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2010 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 3

This was awfully sweet!  I could just see young Jim trying to do something nice for Pam and being totally oblivious to how it could be perceived.

Author's Response:

VB, when it comes to Pam...let's face it...the tall guy just can't help himself.  Those syren powers of Pam Beesly...are just way too strong.

p.s.  Just a big thanks for putting all this together for Nan...seems to have been a huge surprise and an obvious success.  So, thanks for asking me to participate.  It's been such fun and I'm having a great time reading all these wonderful stories.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2010 08:59 am Title: Chapter 3

I just love everything about this story. I love how thoughtful Jim is toward Pam even during his third week of working there. I especially enjoyed how Jim told Angela off. That was great!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words.  As you can tell, I've always felt that Jim knew right away that Pam was...the one.  I guess we've all pretty much known that, too.  And, as much as he tried to be cool about what his real feelings were, a hint of his protective side would bubble to (or at least near) the surface on occasion.  I just thought it might be kind of fun to see what happens if he just 'went for it'...and who better to have it out with than Angela.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2010 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oooo, so much deliciousness in this one.  I loved crafty Jim planning all that for Pam and that tear of hers at the end.  *sigh*  I also liked the British Office feel at the end.  Well done, Mr. Bill.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  I just figured , as much as Jim liked Pam...damn, he fell in love with her right from the get go...I figured it would actually be too painful for him to let her birthday be ruined.  He had to try and make it "a good day!"

p.s. As an aside, I have to ask aquestion? Did you get confused by Michael's "rap".... I mean the way it came out on the page?  When I posted it, I had to edit it because it was misaligned and I thought I fixed it...but obviously when it was actually posted it stayed misaligned.   Oh well.   I hope it wasn't that confusing to readers...after all, it was Micajel

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2010 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 3

You go, Jim! A great birthday and a very good plan for the future!  This was a very nice story. I especially liked Jim giving Angela hell. Well done!

Author's Response: Oh...thanks again.  I kind of enjoyed that part, too!!

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