1 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2022 09:22 am Title: disclosure
A beautiful story about personal evolution. change, and true love!
Date: June 24, 2010 11:11 pm Title: disclosure
::sigh:: I like you and this and the them that you created here. Just great.
Date: June 12, 2010 11:12 am Title: disclosure
Wow, callisto, I've been really busy and I saw this was up, but I've been holding off so I could savor it in peace and quiet. You did not disappoint. This rings so true, and is so very believeable and lovely. Perfect characterization, clean, descriptive writing. I love it. And I laughed out loud at this, because I'm twelve:
“And look…yours is bigger,” she adds, with a wicked grin
Great job!
Date: June 08, 2010 09:11 pm Title: disclosure
Lovely, lovely, lovely! So glad you decided to share this story with us. I look forward to reading whatever you have next.
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2010 08:20 pm Title: disclosure
That was lovelllllllllly!!!! I love how guilty he felt, and how calm Pam was about everything. And the iphone comment lol, it was perfect!
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2010 08:00 pm Title: disclosure
This was so great, short and sweet. I really loved this part,
Her memories with Jim are edged in sharp relief. His posture, his tone, the glint in his eyes, are etched into her mind’s eye with a clarity that defies the monotony of their time together in the office. The few moments they escaped to be themselves, away from co-workers and cameras and fiancĂ©s, made the best days. Nearly all her best memories from the past five years are bound in some way to his eyes, his smile, their shared laughter. His unerring ability to make her smile, even when she doesn’t want to. I also like how she doesn't jump to any conclusions when he says he's a horrible person. I enjoyed this a lot, your writing style flows perfectly, and hope you post something again soon!
9 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2010 05:57 pm Title: disclosure
Wow, that's such a different ending that what I predicted, but I really love it all the same! I'm so glad Pam didn't get angry with Jim for looking at her things and that he did tell her. It would have been awful it he'd lied to her or kept it a secret. Anyways, this was such a great little story, and as always, I'm so glad you went with an original idea - it gets so boring reading the same subject over and over again! Great job, callisto!
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2010 01:06 pm Title: disclosure
Great. Really great.
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2010 07:26 am Title: disclosure
Yeah, that's the bad thing about snooping. You sometimes find what you think you want to find, only to have the realization that you want to un-see it.
Jim's thoughts ring true and that's awesome that Pam didn't get angry with him. It's funny, if a partner were to says "I'm a terrible person" most thoughts go to something really bad (cheating). But Pam isn't worried about that and it shows how solid they are.
I really hope we see another story from you soon.