Date: October 02, 2010 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow, you really, really like to keep us on the edge of our seats, don't you?
The detail is really impressive here. What kind of research did you do? I loved the Cece rolling over scene, so intimate and adorable. Looking forward to seeing what the epilogue brings.
Date: October 01, 2010 05:44 am Title: Chapter 6
Tease!!
Seriously though, thank you for the happy ending.
I'm not sure if you wrote it this way or if I just am hearing it this way in my head but I think its harsh, but well done that in the early parts of this chapter it seems to come out so matter-of-factly. Describing such deep and wild emotions punch by punch, the story is already such a roller coaster, theres no need to add any other frills. Great stuff!
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2010 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aww, what a kind of cheesy but really adorable ending. I'm so happy there's an epilogue, because although this ending actually felt complete for once (I'm never satisfied with story endings! lol), I actually liked this one. I just loved when you wrote about Jim's movements, and when he wrote CC in the night. That was beautiful.
Amazing work on this story, and I'm really looking forwards to that epilogue!
Date: September 30, 2010 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
Okay, you did it. I'm balling. That was so beautiful and I literally held my breathe while reading parts of it. The past where Jim woke up and wrote cc... you killed me, seriouslyI haven't cried over a fic for a long time.
And him walking and falling and Cece laughing - great :) So ecited about the epilouge and anything else to come from you xx