Date: August 12, 2010 08:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoying this one. I'm sure Pam can hear Jim!
Author's Response: Thanks khand3stooges! I'm glad you're enjoying this story!! =)
Date: August 11, 2010 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey girl! I was so happy to see you posting a fic! I secretly love these kinds of fics where Jim and Pam have to find their way back to each other! Sorry I wasn't much help on your last fic... But keep on writing!
Luvs,
-D
Author's Response: Hey!! I haven't seen you around much! I hope everything is well. =) I decided to write these kind of stories where they find their way back together. It's interesting and fun to make an idea and think of an another way to put them together instead of the tv writer's way in the episodes. Anyway, I'm glad you're enjoy reading my story. More to come soon!!
Date: August 11, 2010 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to what happens next! I love seeing Jim and Pam interact with each others family. I'm especially interested in how he's going to fare with her father. I'm also looking forward to seeing if any of Pam's subconscious thoughts will be a part of the story.
Author's Response: Thanks andtheivy, you will see more of that interaction between Jim and her father in the next chapter. I've been thinking about writing about Pam's thoughts and hearing Jim while being in a coma. I'm not quite sure yet where that's going to fit in. But *shrugs* we'll see where this writing will lead me to.
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2010 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Dani - I wasn't expecting this! I'm so sorry that I didn't say that I was going to be away this week and I was out of touch for a while. I wish I had been around to beta this. Let me know if you want me to help out with chapter two, I'm really excited to see where this is going. Great job with the descriptions and dialog, this was very realistic. Keep going and send me an email!
10 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2010 05:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey you posted! I'm looking forward to finding out what happened to Pam before the car accident with the headache and if she's going to be okay.
Author's Response: I finally did! =) I will be writing about that in the 4th or the 5th chapter about why she's having headaches and etc, I don't know yet because I'm still currently writing the third chapter. I hope that I'm keeping everyone on their toes and wondering if she'll be okay once she gets out of coma or not.
Date: August 04, 2010 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good hook to start! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when Jim and Pam are reunited, and I'm very interested to see the interaction between Jim and Pam's family members. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks andtheivy, you will eventually see more of the interaction with Jim and Pam's family in few chapters. I will be updating the next chapter soon. Writing the third chapter at the moment!
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2010 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love the last line of this chapter--it's just so simple and real and something I can picture. Hope she's okay! :o
Author's Response: Thank you! You will see in the next chapter which will be up soon, I just sent to the betas.