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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2010 08:44 pm Title: What did I look like when you loved me?

Is it wrong that I find Jim Halpert baking to be totally hot? I also think it quite believable for him to have a skill like this, I don't know why.

Love the image of Pam watching him with her mouth open in shock as he sices apples at lightening speed lol

Can't wait for the next part.

Author's Response: No it's totally not wrong..it's incredibly endearing. My dad cooks all the time, and my Mother is still enamoroued by it.!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2010 03:50 pm Title: What did I look like when you loved me?

That's cute. I don't know why but I get a kick out of the image of Jim looking down on Pam condescendingly as she cuts apples, “What are you doing?”
... And I always like stories that have a little backstory about a nice relationship between Jim and his mom. I'm the mother of a wonderful son, what can I say?

Author's Response: My boyfriend told me a story about how his mother taught him how to make apple pies when he was little--I snagged the idea from him and put Jim in the scenario. I just love the idea of a mother and son's relationship from when he is very small..enjoy the time with your boy :)

Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2010 09:45 pm Title: What did I look like when you loved me?

Cute! What fun banter. And pie-making Jim? Nice!

Author's Response: Gotta love those apple pies! And thanks! :)

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2010 02:31 pm Title: What did I look like when you loved me?

This is adorable! I LOVE it!! You're so good with their banter. More, please.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I love writing their banter, it's one of my favorite aspects of their relationship.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2010 10:51 am Title: What did I look like when you loved me?

So adorably sweet, I think I got a new cavity ;)  This was a pleasure to read, mediumrare.  I love the idea of Jim knowing how to bake an apple pie and the idea of him spending time with his mom in the kitchen when he was little.  So cute.  

Author's Response: Oh NanReg, your review is so sweet, thank you! More cavity ensued chapters will come

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