10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2011 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
That was fantastic! The smut was hot and I loved all the throwbacks to classic Jim/Pam moments! Now if we could just get rid of that pesky Karen!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad you're enjoying it! Yeah, about Karen...
Date: February 18, 2011 06:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Lady, you're so good! This is keeping me on the edge of my seat! I hope you're really proud of this because this is great!
Author's Response: Awesome!! Thanks so much, I am proud of this one!
Date: February 18, 2011 05:11 am Title: Chapter 4
Once again, another great chapter! I thought it was great that Pam got overly emotional at the bird funeral with all the raging pregnancy hormones, it was really believable. Poor Jim, he totally fell for her. I love how simple of a time they had at the bar just playing a silly game and having fun. Characterization is once again spot on. I am checking daily for updates, so get to writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed Pam's mood swings, I was hoping someone would. Glad you love the characterization, I really try hard at that. New chapter soon!
Date: February 17, 2011 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoying this! It's new and different but very intriguing. Can't wait to read more :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you enjoy what's coming next.
Date: February 17, 2011 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oooh I'm slightlyaddicted to this story. Please don't listen to Mark ;)
Author's Response: YAY, glad you're enjoying it. Wait, you want me not to listen to Mark? Well, he does make sense. Thanks for the review!
Date: February 17, 2011 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
You're a tease. :) Still enjoying this a lot. Waiting for more...
Author's Response: Actually, I'm evil...but I'll take tease for now ;) Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2011 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
Just wana say I'm LOVING this story. Keep it up, can't wait for next chapter! :)
Author's Response: YAY! Glad you're loving it. Thanks so much!
Date: February 17, 2011 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm in love with this story. Sorry if that's weird for you to hear...;) Besides, he couldn’t help that in the back of his mind, tucked far away, there was some one else. Your gradual unveiling of their night together works so well. To paraphrase Phyllis Vance, the anticipation is delicious.
Author's Response: It's not weird, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: February 17, 2011 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
Um. Wow. Mark's advice? Here's hoping Jim doesn't take it. And that was just plain evil, ending the flashback with Pam standing at Jim's door. I'm hooked! Waiting for the next chap...
Author's Response: Well, Mark was looking out for his friend and trying to be practical when he doesn't have all the information. Um, yeah, I'm sadistic like that. Thanks for the review!!
Date: February 17, 2011 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Alright I'm hooked....I'll read anything as long as it's well written! I look forward to lots of quick updates because when you have a hook this good YOU NEED to finish! :-)
Please don't wait forever for Jim to find out though! I once read a story where a similar plot happened and the guy was raising the kid for like 4 years before the mother told him.....
hehehehe though I can't wait for the big flashback!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Four years? yeesh--this takes place within 9 months, so there definitely won't be that long of a wait.
Date: February 17, 2011 06:09 am Title: Chapter 1
I love it, I love it, I love it!!! Please Keep'um coming lady!
Author's Response: Yay! Yay! Thanks!! More on the way!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2011 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
I can safely say that this is the first time I've ever read anything like this in this fandom, and that's a good thing! I'm really intrigued by this premise, and I'm not usually one who's into AU fics. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm flattered, I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I tried to come up with something that hasn't been done a thousand times, so I'm glad you feel it's fresh! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: February 16, 2011 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, this is just a great premise! I am so looking forward to seeing what you do with it.
I like the way you are switching between the (moving) present and the convention, when they met. I'm enjoying the slow reveal on two levels.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, the flashbacks are a lot of fun to write. I, too, kinda like the slow pace of letting everything unravel. Hope you like what's up next!
Date: February 16, 2011 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Spaceorphan, I just discovered this story and had the absolute pleasure of reading all three chaps at once. Plain and simple, I love this! Despite this being AU, your characterizations are true, and you beautifully weave in bits of familiar elements while keeping it fresh. I hope you're able to update regularly, because I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Characterization is a big thing for me, so I'm glad that's coming through. I love weaving in the little details from the show. Hope you like the next part!
8 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2011 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
You've officially won me over. I don't normally care for AU's that stray too far away from the show, but this is a fun idea and I like how you're telling it with the flashbacks. Come on now, let's hurry back to the convention and the bow chicka bow wow. :)
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! Hopefully, you'll find that this AU doesn't stray *that* much from cannon. :) Glad you like the flashbacks, though they're only in the first 1/4 of the story, so I hope I have you hooked enough to continue!
Date: February 16, 2011 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
What do I love more than this insanely intriguing story? Quick updates! This is awesome and I really can't wait for more. *taps finger* I love how you're going between how it happened back then and forward to the present. Oh and I really got a good laugh at the end, 'yeah, he's hot.' He so is.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm on a roll writing it, so hopefully the inspiration will keep up. The flashbacks are kinda fun, even if they're limited. Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: February 16, 2011 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
Really enjoying this. Can;t wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: YAY, thanks!
Date: February 16, 2011 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
LMAO Poor Jim, he so got told off by that kid LMAO. Great chapter. I hope she calls him soooooooon.
Author's Response: Aww, I don't know if I feel so bad for Jim, thanks for the review though!
Date: February 16, 2011 07:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Argh. I usually don't read AU's at all - just not my cup of tea, and I'll admit "Pam found herself pregnant" was the thing that made me open this, because, well, it's a crazy way to put it. But now I'm going to have to stick around and see how she "found herself" that way. You have me hooked. Welcome.
Author's Response: Ah, the seduction of a good summary line. :) Glad you're on board! While it is an AU, I think you'll find that there's a lot related to canon. Hope you stick with it and thanks for the review!
Date: February 16, 2011 03:52 am Title: Chapter 2
Okay, I'm loving this, please post more soon! I think you're the first person to ever include Danny in a fic, nice work.
Author's Response: So glad to hear you're enjoying it! yeah, I hadn't read one with Danny either, so I thought it'd be a fun inclusion.
Date: February 15, 2011 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, so I'm definitely enjoying where this is going! This is great! Are you going to do the merger?!? Soo excited for what's to come!
Author's Response: Oh, Dedeen, I'm not gonna just hand you the plotline, gotta keep reading ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: February 15, 2011 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm officially hooked- keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you are!
Date: February 14, 2011 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooooooooh very interesting. Looking forward to seeing what you do with this.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2011 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm very excited about this! I'm a huge sucker for AUs and I can't say that I've read one like this before. Great start.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I enjoy AUs as well. Hope you like where it goes.
Date: February 14, 2011 06:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting start. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!