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Reviewer: Mirielle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02, 2008 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

sooo cute!!

Reviewer: danceprincess202 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

A-MAZ-ING. I needed a little more Jam after tonight and this was perfect!

Reviewer: Snarkland Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2007 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Plot twist!

That was great.  I really really loved it.  If that happened, in that way, in my office I would totally believe it was someone else.

Well done!

Reviewer: StarryDreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 07:03 am Title: Chapter 1

You are very, very sneaky. I was worried for a while. I'm glad my suspicions were correct though.

Reviewer: office_romance Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yea!!!!! I knew it!!!! This was so good!!! Aww!!!

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2007 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's funny...my friend and I were just last week bemoaning the fact that Jim and Pam may never really get together in canon, simply due to the Moonlighting issue. (And even if they did, we'd never get to see the 'good stuff'.) And then we tried to speculate how TPTB could keep them apart realistically without either of them getting into serious relationships with others...because as an OTP, that is just not allowed.

But on Monday I realized that maybe Jim and Pam *could* get together, and keep it a secret...because the office cameras only really see them at work. Then tonight, I find your story that shows me exactly that.

I just found this site this week (I'm a serious Veronica Mars fangirl, but am pretty new to the Office US fandom), and have immersed myself in all of the J/P goodness. I'm systematically working my way through your stories, favoriting most all of them, and although I don't leave feedback for many of them, I wanted you to know how much I'm loving them all. Great work. 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2007 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1

good ending. cause i sure felt sorry for jim. and then it took me a second to connect jim=james, cause i was like is she dating his brother thats just low!!!!

okay, good story :) now that i have the whole james/jim thing sorted out.  

Reviewer: McGigi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 10:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Guh. You got me with this one....it was absolutely lovely and so satisfying! I wondered what you meant at TWOP when you said you were cheering yourself up; I thought, 'how can Pam with another guy be cheerful??" Rock on!

Reviewer: Amyryd Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Count me in with the gullible! I was stunned when it was Jim at the door. Well done Moxie!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 08:49 am Title: Chapter 1

Great surprise ending! As I was reading, I was thinking of Cher in Clueless, who sent herself the chocolates and gifts to make Christian "jealous"...but this is even better!

Reviewer: moofoot Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 12:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Well, you know, I'm a dork. I accidentally clicked on the reviews instead of reading this story and that completely ruined it for me. =$ Of course, I still loved it, because Jim's reactions to everything were perfect and just right.

And I love the middle names. They just fit them and their names. Great job!!

Reviewer: Rebecca Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2006 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

either i'm really gullible or you're a very good writer.  I think i'll take choice two. i was really suprised by this ending, great job!

Reviewer: Muppet Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2006 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

I have no idea how I posted 3 times in a row.  Sorry:(


Author's Response: hee - that's okay.  I figured you just really, really, REALLY liked it!  ;-D

Reviewer: Muppet Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2006 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I actually completely believed Pam had a new boyfriend who wasn't Jim until the reveal at the door.  And do you want to know the sad part?  I voted in the poll for his middle name and I VOTED FOR MATTHEW.  Sometimes I am dumb:)

This is a really cute story, once I realized Pam had not actually lost her mind:)

Reviewer: Muppet Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2006 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I actually completely believed Pam had a new boyfriend who wasn't Jim until the reveal at the door.  And do you want to know the sad part?  I voted in the poll for his middle name and I VOTED FOR MATTHEW.  Sometimes I am dumb:)

This is a really cute story, once I realized Pam had not actually lost her mind:)

Reviewer: 4and7Forever Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2006 12:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Best JAM story I have ever read.... EVER.  I love the end, I was not expecting that at all.  :)  I feel so happy now!

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww, that's adorable, and I was definitely surprised!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Moxie -- you rock!  This is so freaking adorable!  And totally in character.  Never, ever, ever stop writing!!


Author's Response: Thanks so much, Lisahoo!  You are such a sweetie!

Reviewer: ali Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

that was so sweet, loved it.

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

I had my fingers crossed it would turn out to be our boy!  Yay for ficfluff holding us over!

Now I'm in the mood for cookies -- the chocolate chip kind, not the Angela kind.  ;) 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

You got me!  I thought it was someone else, especially when Jim seemed so bothered by it all. What a happy and sweet story. Just what I needed today! 

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awwww......I voted for Michael, but Matthew is nice too! Thanks for the sweet pick-me-up!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

I knew it all along - but it didn't make it any less sweet.  :)

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

You used the middle name I suggested on TWoP! Oh Moxie, there are a dozen cezanne roses on the way for you. Good fluff piece.

Author's Response: Yes, I decided it was both a lovely name on its own as well as a good fit with James Halpert.  :-)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Somehow I knew it was Jim cause I don't think she would have been that happy othewise.

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