Date: August 03, 2011 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 14
AAAAHHHH! I can't take it, darn you Bob give a guy a break. PLEASE! Seriously I love this story, keep it coming.
Author's Response: I couldn't make it easy on our guy, I needed to make him fight for it just a little bit. I'm so thrilled that you liked this story! :)
Date: August 03, 2011 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 14
Gah! Come ON, Bob! Our boy, Jim, needs a job!!! Hmmm...how is Jim going to magically pull a rabbit out of his hat? Guess I'll have to wait and see...
Author's Response: I'm all delayed in replying to reviews... so you know how it ends now lol Thank you so much for everything, you're wonderful!
Date: August 03, 2011 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh, no, poor Jim. :(
I did enjoy this chapter, despite Jim not making the sale. I loved Jim and Pam's back and forth, especially about the notes. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked this chapter and the little thing about the notes. I thought it'd be a cute little theme to keep with. :)
Date: August 03, 2011 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 14
Dude, you cannot leave it like that. I thought Bob would definitely agree, because it's Jim. You're such a teaseee!!!
I want to climb in to my computer and hug Jim so much aw :(
Author's Response: Do not fear! I had to break it somewhere. I don't want to ruin things but I'm almost at the finished line. Stay tuned and thanks for all of the support the whole way through this story! Xxx
Date: July 31, 2011 11:35 am Title: Chapter 13
Finally catching up here after being gone. I was so happy to see this was updated. It was nice reading a chapter with some hope. I love the angst but my heart can't take too much. I do love this story though.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm really happy you're still with me and this story. I'm kind of stuck in the middle of the next chapter (I shouldn't have left it half way and then went on a long 4 day weekend break from it, ugh) but I'm hoping to work through that today, so hopefully I'll have it up either later or tomorrow. :-)
Date: July 28, 2011 10:22 am Title: Chapter 13
really sweet chapter! I'm all warm and fuzzy now!
Author's Response: =) Aw! Thanks, happy you liked! More soon!
Date: July 26, 2011 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 13
Okay. First.
Thanks for the call for updates on all the unfinished WIPs! I figure we have you to thank for the activity on the archive. Thank you!
Now. New chapter. As always, it was great. I loved how you showcased how well Jim and Pam work together as a team. I love how she talks Jim down after his interview and later once he is home, how she was able to decode the possible why for this odd interview 'homework' Jim was given. I also really enjoyed the family time you gave us in this chapter as well, Cece had a milestone, aided by her daddy, when she was able to have grandparents there cheering her on, I was so happy for her! And how perfect was it to end with a little nap. That was just lovely.
I cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Aw! It was getting a little lonely around here, and I'm so happy to see the updates too! Hopefully others will join in on the fun. I'm so happy to hear that you liked the little snippet of family life in this chapter. I started feeling like maybe it was too out of no where but I was really happy with how it turned out, so thanks for letting me know you liked that part. I love that these two are a team and I'm so happy to see that what I'm trying to show is coming across. I'm loving writing Cece, and I'll have a hard time not including her in future stories lol More of this on the way soon, I'm away for a few days starting tomorrow so if I can't squeeze out the next chapter today, I promise to have an update by Monday evening. Very happy that you liked this chapter and I'm looking forward to your thoughts on the next one when it's posted! :-)
Date: July 25, 2011 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
I want to be your 100th reviewer, will someone sneak in before me lol.
As always, this was awesome. I don't know why, but Jim being the one to take Cece to the bathroom just got me all googly eyes for Jim :)
I cannot wait to see Jim put this to BobVance, and maybe another person on the list ;)
I'M TRYING TO WRITE x
Author's Response: WRITE WRITE WRITE!! You're my 100th review, aw! Thanks so much! I'm really happy that you enjoyed this little chapter, I know it wasn't much so I'm glad you were able to enjoy it. I had to get Cece to her milestone, she's almost 3 now lol The more I write her, the more I want a little girl lol More on the way soon, stay tuned! xx
Date: July 25, 2011 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 13
You know I join in on that plea, too! I'm psyched to see what happens with Vance. I love seeing Jim and Pam as a team, Pam being Jim's strength despite her problems. I also love that their parents get to witness their love. It makes me smile :)
Author's Response: I know, and I was so excited to see a few updates this morning! I'm so happy that you liked this little chapter, I know not too much happened but I needed to finish up that day and get Cece to her milestone. Glad you enjoyed it! More on the way soon, thanks as always! :-)
Date: July 25, 2011 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
I realized I didn't review chapter 12 yet, sorry about that. I loved them both. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Aw, no worries, I'm happy to hear that you're still reading and enjoying! Thanks so much! More on the way soon! And I hope to see an update to your story!!
Date: July 19, 2011 08:33 am Title: Chapter 12
Really good, solid chapter. I really liked the part where Jim is trying to wake her up so that she doesn't get scared of the hospital room. Tooo cute! I'm looking forward to your chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm loving writing Jim's interaction with Cece and I'm so happy you think it's cute! Thanks so much! Much more on the way soon! :-)
Date: July 18, 2011 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
Another great chapter in this amazing story. I was getting nervous towards the end that we would have to wait for another update to see how the interview went. I was really glad that you fit it in this chapter. I also really liked how it wasn't just one of those deals where you either gave Jim the job or didn't. I think the chance to learn radio sales and then try to crack some tough customers to get the job gives you some interesting avenues to explore in the coming updates. I'm anxious to see if Jim uses his connection with Phyllis and Bob Vance (Vance Refrigeration) to try and sell to Vance Refrigeration. That was a great twist right at the end by the way. Needless to say, I truly enjoyed this chapter, enjoy this whole story, and can't wait to read the next chapter. You really have a great ability to write Jim and Pam dialogue in a way that fits them and how they interact on the show. Great job and keep it up!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so so much for saying such wonderful things! Amazing story? Wow! That's so sweet of you to say! When I started writing this I had no idea it would catch on, so hearing this means so so much. :) I'm about a chapter ahead of myself now, so we will see how things play out with Bob Vance very soon. I'm going to be sad when this story is over, but it's not quite done yet, lots more ahead, so hopefully you'll enjoy the rest of it and let me know your thoughts! I'm happy that you thought the twist I threw in was good and believable, it's half an experience of mine and half of a friend's. Hope you like how this continues! :-) Thanks for always being so supportive! It means so much!
10 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2011 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 12
boy, my stomach was churning nervously this whole chapter, but hopefully he'll be able to use his friendship with bob vance in his favor!
Author's Response: Sorry for making you nervous! More on the way soon, happy to know you're following along and enjoying this story! We'll see how things play out with Bob Vance very soon. :-)
Date: July 18, 2011 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 12
Never, ever, never apologize for a long chapter! I love your story so much and if it is a lengthy chapter then I can enjoy longer before I have to hit the edge of my seat to await more from you! And I didn't think that this chapter had any wasted words, so again, lovely work!
Interesting interview project Jim has. I cannot wait to see how he does. And how amazing is it that he has a friendly name on his homework!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you weren't bothered by the length, I worry that I'm too wordy sometimes, but I hate taking things out once I've written them. Thanks so much for the lovely compliment of my writing. I really appreciate it! I know this project seems a little odd but part of it happened to me, and part of it happened to a friend, so I incorporated it here (more of her experience than mine, which was showing up at the place to interview and finding the person that I was supposed to meet with wasn't there - and I couldn't do that to Jim lol) So happy that you liked this chapter and are continuing to follow this story! HOpe you like the next one as well, more is on the way soon, I'm about a chapter ahead of myself right now, so the next one will be up soon. :)
Date: July 18, 2011 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
No. WAY! Vance Refrigeration?! You totally got me there, missy :D Love it! Never apologize for long chapters. This was great, Danielle-having all three parents around, Pam and Jim's interactions, adorable Cece. You're the best :-*
Author's Response: I can't believe I missed responding to this - such a lovely review! Thanks so much, you're so sweet to me! :-)
Date: July 18, 2011 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 12
Never EVER appologise for writing long fics, they're the best kind.
I really enjoyed the interaction with the parents, how they all took care of different things for Jim while he went to get ready.
Like always, you write them SO in charcter and it makes me so happy to see when you have updated this. I LOVED the little twistat the end with Vace Refridgeration. Oh PLEASE Bob, help a man out :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed this chapter and it's good to hear that it wasn't too wordy. I probably could have saved a good portion of it for the next chapter, but as I've almost finished writing this story now, I'm really happy with the way the flow of the story is going, so I'm glad to hear that you're still enjoying this. It's great to hear that they're in character, I try my best to keep it that way. Thanks as always! xx :-)
Date: July 15, 2011 06:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh boy! I don't even know where to begin! I hope Pam and the baby continue to do okay! And I'm soo excited about Jim and the sales job too!
Author's Response: So excited that you liked this chapter! Thanks! I think it's time for them to have a little bit of hope now. More on the way soon!
Date: July 14, 2011 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
Finally, a ray of sunshine for the Halperts! This was very sweet.
I hope next week is better for you!
Author's Response: Thanks! Writing all that angst was getting to me. Glad you liked the chapter. I'm hoping next week is better also, thank you! :-) More on the way soon.
Date: July 13, 2011 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
I'm sorry you had a tough week... But I can assure you that the new chapter was worth the wait!! I am so glad that Jim and Pam were able to have a good come clean chat. I hope that tomoro's interview goes well, and that they won't have to sell the house...
I hope that you feel better!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm feeling a little better. Hoping that it continues, I hate being sick. I'm so happy to hear that their chat came across well, I was worried that it was too much, so I'm relieved to hear that you liked it. I think even though they know they love each other, there are still sometimes when they need to be reassured. Next chapter is on the way soon, I'm hoping within the next day or two. Stay tuned, and thanks so much for such a lovely review! :) Hope you continue to enjoy this story.
Date: July 13, 2011 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
Yay! An update! So sorry to hear you were sick, but I admit, I've been checking the archive nonstop since you posted on the boards that you were working on the next chapter. /stalker
Another quality chapter. You really brought out that concerned and loving side of both Jim and Pam that we hardly get to see on the show, and yet you still hit the chacterizations on the head. I can't wait to see how Jim's interview goes!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm feeling a little better today, hopefully that continues. Thanks so much for the lovely review, and I'm so excited that you're still liking this story so much to keep checking the archive. I'm so happy to hear that you thought I was in character, that really means a lot to hear, especially since I've been under the weather. More on the way soon, I am hoping within the next day or two, I have this really clear idea in my head for the next chapter. Thanks so much for saying such lovely things! :)
Date: July 13, 2011 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
I'm sorry you were so sick. I hope you're feeling better, I admit as soon as I saw you'd updated I squealed a little!
Everything baout this was gorgeous, Jim putting on odd shoes - which I could totally see him doing, her getting him to call the radio station- HIM SELLING HIMSELF (and you know Patricia probably thought he sounded sexy;))
I cannot wait for the next update
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm feeling a little better finally. It's been rough, but I'm pleased that I was able to get this chapter up. I am going off outline right now, as I have been thinking this may be too quick of a wrap up so I think we're going to be here for a while longer. Stay tuned for more, and I'm so happy as always to see that you liked the latest chapter! Initially I wanted Jim to say all that in an interview, but it worked so well here as a way to get his foot in the door, and I'm so happy that you agree! More soon! :-) Thanks!
Date: July 13, 2011 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
First, I can't even tell you how many times I have checked this for an update. Sorry to hear your week was bad. Hope things are going better.
I am so happy Jim at least has an interview. I know it might not be too realistic if everything is o.k. now but I don't know how much more I can take.:) I trust you 100% with this and can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: Sorry to leave you hanging! Things are getting better, thank you! I had to get him an interview at the very least. I could keep going with this story as new ideas pop up in my head that aren't on my outline, so we'll see. I'm going to slowly start sewing up the mess I made lol Thanks for following along with me on this journey! More on the way soon!
9 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2011 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
You don't know how happy I am that our boy has an interview! Whew. This is killing me. It's so good ;)
I hope you're feeling better, Danielle!
Author's Response: Thanks, Nancy! Yep, our boy has an interview! I'm so happy you enjoyed this latest update! I'm feeling a little better thanks, the meds seem to be helping. :) More on the way soon!
Date: July 11, 2011 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
I know that you were taking the long weekend off, but I am really hoping that soon we will find out how Pam and Baby Girl A are doing at the hospital...
I miss you!
Author's Response: So sorry the update took so long! I've been under the weather this week and had a bad work week last week. It's there now. Hope you like it!
10 [Report This]Date: July 02, 2011 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
I haven't written a review in many, many months (despite shamefully still reading every story...I'm a bad reader) but I had to comment after reading this. I mean holy cow, this story was really good already. And the letter from Pam was so sad. But a call from the hospital too?! Are you trying to kill me woman? And now you're going to have a long weekend? Ohhhh no, I don't think so!
Okay, maybe that's a little unreasonable after three updates in a week. But still, you can't leave me hanging like this. Danielle! I can't wait to read whatever you give us next. And I pray to the Gods of fanfic writing that this has a happy ending :D
Author's Response: I can't even tell you how happy seeing your name up there has made me! How are you? Hope all is well! So sorry for the delay in updating, I had a bad week last week at work, and this week I've been sick, but I managed to get the latest chapter up here today. Hope you like it! Writing Pam's letter did take a lot out of me. But I think he needed to see it, he needed something to kick him into gear and get him to listen to her. Hope you do enjoy the next chapter and the way I start wrapping it up! Hope to hear from you again! :)