10 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2011 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm so happy to come here and not only a new story from you, but also two chapters!!
You should know that so far... Awesome! I love the revisiting and revelations they get when they watch what happened in the past. Loved that as they watched Jim was squeezing Pam's shoulder and holding on so tight, I could feel his angst for what he was watching and his appreciation for what he was holding in the words you gave us.
Cannot wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really happy that you're following this story too! I'm really having fun getting into Jim's head with this one. More on the way soon, just settling in after the storm. Shouldn't be too long. :)
Date: August 27, 2011 01:02 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm really enjoying this!
Can't wait for Jim's reaction when they watch the next episode.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, that's awesome to hear! More on the way soon, just settling in after the storm. :)
Date: August 22, 2011 06:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to more! This is such an intereting idea! keep'em coming!
Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry for the delay, more on the way soon. So happy you like this so far! :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2011 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm enjoying it very much! This is such an important aspect of the characters to explore. More often than not, it's passed over with the assumption they "forgave and forgot." You've got Jim's mental processes dead on... can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so so much! I feel like they could have talked it all out, but seeing it all in front of him on the tv really would just blow his mind and make him feel so terrible about it, and I'm sure that Pam wouldn't have come out and told him that he made her cry a lot, but I think that's what they were going for that season, especially in the beginning of it, and she slowly transformed into the strong person she was at the end of the season. That you think I have Jim's thought process down means so much to me, and I hope you will let me know what you think of future chapters! :)
Date: August 21, 2011 08:34 am Title: Chapter 2
Yay, I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so glad Jim feels guilty about his actions in season three. And no wonder Pam wants to skip the next episode. I can't wait to see Jim's reaction.
So excited for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm so happy that you're liking this! I think of all the days during that year, Pam remembers the inventory luau day maybe more than a lot of the other days. I really do think Jim would feel guilty while watching this, since I'm sure what ever they talked about during their first week can't really describe what he's seeing now, I think he's finally seeing what a jerk he was being to her without realizing it. Thanks so much again and I hope you'll let me know what you think about future chapters! :)
Date: August 21, 2011 07:18 am Title: Chapter 2
I feel bad that I enjoy reliving some of that angst. It's so nice they can tell each other what really was going on instead of the version that was inside their heads at the time. It mad me so sad to think Pam thought Jim hated her.
I am so thrilled this will be longer than 2 chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm having fun writing them watching the angst, and I feel like I picked a good point in their marriage, almost five years married with two kids, I think they're stronger every day and can handle what they're seeing. I was writing last night and thinking that I shouldn't gloss over anymore episodes, so I'm going to get all of them in here. So happy that you're liking this! Thanks so much for always being so supportive, it really means a lot, more on the way soon! :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2011 05:48 am Title: Chapter 2
Yay! I'm glad to hear that this is going to be longer than you thought. There's a lot of angst to cover.
I really can't wait to see Jim's response to Pam crying in the hallway.
Author's Response: You're right, there is a lot of angst to cover. I hadn't realized that I shouldn't gloss over another episode (notice how I forgot about the convention lol - I know, how terrible of me!) I'm really happy that you're enjoying this so far. More on the way soon! :)
Date: August 20, 2011 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love the recapping and the angst. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm having fun writing this! More on the way soon, so happy to hear you're liking this! :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2011 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
YAAAAAAAAAAY at it being a little longer than two chapyers, what a shame ;)
I love love love the way we're watching the show with them. I can totally see Jim's face when he sees he's made Pa cry. Oh god, I heart you :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks Sally! I'm having fun reliving this season and writing it from his POV so far. I was writing last night and said, well I can't gloss over another episode. Already did that with the convention... though in my head that episode doesn't exist LOL Thanks so much for the love, more on the way soon! :)