10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2011 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love to read whatever you write for us. I have been awfully delinquent in my reviews this fall season, but I honestly adore this peek you've given us into Jim's thought process here. The style you've written in is fantastic. I feel like I am reading his brain here!
I'm not sure why, and I'm not even sure how this fits, but my brain insists on somehow placing this into an AU place similar to Fault Lines... Is that okay, or should I encourage my mind to switch lanes here?
I'm glad that you haven't wrapped this story yet! I love when I see an update, but that it isn't finished yet...
Author's Response: Hi there! I am so happy to see you liked this story. It's slightly AU in that I gave Pam and Jim 2 girls instead and kept the same name that I used in Fault Lines, but I tried to follow canon as closely as possible. Which ever way you want to look at it is all good by me as long as you're enjoying reading it! It's great to hear from you and hope you'll pop back in and let me know what you thought of the conclusion! :) Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2011 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yay for more! Can't wait for your next update. I love that you addressed the deleted scene from "PDA!"
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the including of deleted scenes. I figure, even if we never saw it, they still happened. (minus the Pam giving Jim the middle finger during the Delivery - I'm so NOT on board with that, no matter how cranky Pam was) Thanks so much for always saying such nice things, and thanks for sticking with the story! :) Hope you enjoy the conclusion!
Date: September 18, 2011 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
Loving it all. Please post more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sorry for the delay in posting, hope you like the conclusion! :)
Date: September 16, 2011 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 6
Another awesome chapter! And yay, I'm glad you're continuing!
I'm glad the Roy bar issue got addressed, and I can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, sorry for the delay in replying to reviews! I'm happy you like what I've done so far with this story, and again thank you so much for posting this idea :) Hope you enjoy the conclusion!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2011 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
One thing I freaking adore about your stories, is the way you throw in stuff from the deleted scenes and stuff, super cuteeeee.
The thought of Jim getting all grrr at Roy and imagining him hitting her was hot LOL
Author's Response: Thanks! I felt like that would be Jim's initial reaction, especially since he really doesn't like Roy at all. Thanks for always being my cheerleader, it means more than you know! Thank you :)
Date: September 16, 2011 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 6
Once again I was practically not breathing while reading some of this. I honestly can't tell you how much I love this story. You even made me change my mind about the butt smack.:) Thank You!!
Author's Response: That's awesome! I know at first I was iffy about the butt smack, but I've since convinced myself that it's okay. Especially with the way he's looking at her afterwards. I wish someone looked at me that way. Thank YOU for sticking with this story I really appreciate it! :)
Date: September 16, 2011 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 6
Love, Love, Love this chapter!! I was so happy when you mentioned the deleted scenes from Sex Ed. They should've kept it.... I didn't really like that episode, but now I do... I'm glad you're not done with this one. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you thank you! I'm so happy you liked the incorporation. I wanted to put a few things here and there from the more recent past than just dealing with season 3, so I'm happy it worked here for you. Thanks for sticking with me. :)