1 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2019 02:17 pm Title: Dunder Mifflin, this is Pam
Great song choice! That moment when they're looking at each other and they both KNOW is killer. And then she drops the friend bomb on him and my heart breaks for both of them.
And, ugh, this is so Roy.
8 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2013 11:52 am Title: Dunder Mifflin, this is Pam
"Nonetheless, as selfish as it was, he couldn't help but breathe a sigh of relief at the news."Oh, Jim, Jim, Jim. Tough being in love with your friend, eh? Another great chap.
Date: February 22, 2012 03:51 am Title: Dunder Mifflin, this is Pam
You should do some more of these! Like maybe their wedding reception, or a honeymoon story, or their first date, or Phillip's birth.
Author's Response: I would love to do some of those stories, especially their first date, but they're such BIG moments and I'm not sure I could do any of them justice.
Thank you so much for the review! :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2011 05:35 am Title: Dunder Mifflin, this is Pam
Great job telling the story behind that drawing! I love these glimpses into the scenes we never got to see, and your characters are spot-on. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thanks! I love that the show references to small moments between Jim and Pam and never shows them. It leaves a little more to our imagination. ;) I'm glad my characterization was accurate because it's what I pay most attention to while writing.
10 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2011 06:47 pm Title: Dunder Mifflin, this is Pam
How have I never seen this little picture, great story behind it too :)
Author's Response: I know, I learned about the picture recently. It just made me love Jim a little more, if that's possible. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2011 04:19 pm Title: Dunder Mifflin, this is Pam
On my phone so I can't type much, just wanted to say how much I like these 2 chapters! Great characterization and great detail (the drawing I never noticed but nice catch. I love little things like that and I love that jim drew it). Anyways, looking forward to more. IMHO it fits the timeline well. I completely heard Pam's voice throughout. Keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you! I always considered characterization to be the most important thing in fanfiction, so to hear you say I did it well means a lot.