10 [Report This]Date: December 03, 2011 04:51 am Title: Chapter 5
I've been a bad reviewer lately, so let my apologize for that. I love this story and I love how you incorporated Pam teaching Jim how to drive stick.
Author's Response: I've been just as bad at replying to reviews lol I'm sorry it takes forever. I'm so happy that you're liking this story. I get so nervous every time I post a new chapter that it's being dragged out too much. I just love incorporating little things like that, glad you enjoyed it! :) I'm trying to work on the next chapter today but I can't tear myself away from reading, so hopefully it'll be updated soon. :)
Date: December 02, 2011 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
It seems like these days I am always behind in reading and commenting. I too am appreciating the sweetness of this story. I always imagine their connection to be so strong that it would be hard not to fall right back into their banter. I am loving this and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I imagine it like that too. That they can be mad at each other but still love one another. That's what I adore about their relationship. Even I. Season 2 whenever things got awkward they were still able to get back to their banter. I'm happy to hear youre still enjoying this. I hope you'll like the rest!
Date: December 01, 2011 11:13 am Title: Chapter 5
I'm loving this story. I wonder how you're going to work this out! Keep'm coming!
Author's Response: Thanks! That means a lot! I've been wondering if everyone was still liking this story. I have a plan, and ... you'll see lol More on the way soon, thanks so much for the encouraging support! :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 01, 2011 10:32 am Title: Chapter 5
So many other stories have Jim and Pam losing their temper with each other, and as much as I can sometimes see that have happening, this is what I imagine their talk to be like.
Author's Response: Oh I know, and for the longest time I thought that they really did yell at one another. But the more I've written and the more I've watched the episodes over again, I don't think they raise their voices to one another at all. No matter how mad they are with one another. I'm glad you like my take on things with this story, because I think that while they were really angry and hurt, they also love one another so much that they wouldn't raise their voices.
10 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2011 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
You made me cry...
Author's Response: :( I'm sorry! If it helps, I cried a little while writing the last part.
Date: November 30, 2011 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
Danielle, I absolutely loved this chap. It made my little heart go pitter pat :) Their reconnecting, their speech patterns and gestures all felt so organic.
“I’d never lie to you, Pam,” his voice low and serious as he stared at her. That right there gave me chills.
I'm excited for your next update. I just really want to see how you have them fully reconnect. Can't wait :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much Nancy! I'm planning on showing lots more of their attempts to reconnect, and I'm fighting the urge to wrap it up sooner than I planned. I love when you pick out a line like this, it means more to me than you know. Thank you so much, more is definitely on the way. :)
Date: November 30, 2011 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was sooo good, I don't even know where to start. The way you have Pam admit she's mad at him, but they're just talking it out, no raised voices etc is exactly how I saw it here. And how you have Jim so proud of Pam's new found independence is perfectly in character.Everything about this story is amazeballs.
Author's Response: Thank you so so much! I can't thank you enough for the support and encouragement. It keeps me going, that's for sure. I hoped that Pam's independence seemed realistic, and I thought the Niagara thing fit in pretty good there. I'm so happy you liked this chapter. You know what a struggle it was for me to get done, so thank you for this. I wanted to do something where they don't yell at each other. I don't think either of them yell. (tell that to the other stories I've written lol) Anyways, thanks so much. More on the way. I've already started the next chapter, even though this one doesn't seem to be hitting it out of the park for many others. :)