Date: March 17, 2012 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ahh! Yes, Pam. You totally have to do something! Go for it! haha :) I'm liking the build-up, seeing them joke and get to know new things about each other. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy that you liked seeing them joke around. I wasn't sure how to get to showing them becoming friends again, feeling closer to one another, and I always have a tendency to simplify things for them. I'm happy it came out good to you! Thank you for all of the cheer leading throughout this, it really wouldn't have been here if not for you and Sally pushing me. :)
Date: March 17, 2012 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 8
I don't know how I didn't see this story before, but I just read all 8 chapters - I'm enjoying it so much! Oh, if only Season 3 had REALLY gone this way....sigh. Doesn't seem choppy at all to me, and you seem to really have Jim and Pam's voices down well. Thanks for all your awesome writing! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review! I'm so happy that you liked it. I'd been worried about it being choppy because I'd been away from the story for so long. Thank you so much for all of the support, I'm so happy you liked this story! :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2012 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
It is definitely not coming across as choppy, it is coming across as awesomesauce though - because it is!!!! I read this screaming (in my head - is it wrong I admitted that?) KISS, JUST DO IT.
Original and amazing as always. I love how you tell a story.
Author's Response: The just kiss, do it is the exact reaction I was going for! I'm so happy you liked it, I couldn't have done it without your help! Thank you so much for the lovely compliments! :) xx
Date: March 12, 2012 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
Kiss him Pam! Just do it! He's not going anywhere! And speaking of kissing as Michael Scott said to Dwight; K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple Stupid. So, thats exactly what Pam should do. I know, that was random and unrelated but I was just watching an old episode and I thought I'd mention it. Okay, so yeah it was a little hard to follow at times, but I got through it. This stories tempo and emotional range is so much different then Indigo and Crimson. Obviously because this one has a more awkward reaction between the two, while the other they can be more lovey gushy. And strangely I feel more comfortable reading the lovey gushy one. This is my point; you are great at writing both emotional states, the awkward and the love, because they both seem so real. I can literally feel the love flying off the pages, or in this case the discomfort and doubt, which explains why I feel more comfortable reading Indigo and Crimson. Thats the a little theory I worked up just know, cause I thought of it. I think this is my longest review on this site. I've got longer ones elsewhere though. Anyway, bye-bye till your next update.
Author's Response: Funny you should mention that you're more comfortable reading the lovey gushy ones, cause I had an easier time writing the lovey gushy than I did writing them before they got together. Glad you were able to follow it, I had a problem getting the groove back in there with being away from the story for so long. I enjoy your reviews so much, I have no complaints about the length! Thank you so much for the lovely compliments, I really truly appreciate it! :)
Date: March 12, 2012 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
So glad he didn't go out with Karen. Dropping stronger hints is well in character for them too. Thanks for giving us another non-date that I really think they would have had tons of :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm happy to see that you enjoyed this! I think they would have done this plenty and not really realized it, even before he left for Stamford I think that they hung out together a little bit and when they did it had a sense of a date but not really. Glad you liked! :) Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: March 12, 2012 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
So glad you're updating this, Danielle. I was heartbroken for Pam, and I'm so glad that Jim didn't give up. Their sweet awkwardness around each other is adorable. Keep going, girl! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Nancy! I hope you're still reading! Thanks for all of the support throughout this, it's meant so much to me! :) xoxo