1 [Report This]Date: June 17, 2020 09:35 am Title: Chapter 9
This is the most incredible build-up I've ever come across. Thank you SO MUCH for writing this masterpiece! It's been EXACTLY what I was looking for!!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2012 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
What a perfectly lovely end, Danielle! So proud of you for finishing this, and so well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much my deaf friend, I am so thrilled that you liked it and that you're proud of me, that means so much to me! Thank you times a million :) xx
10 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2012 09:31 am Title: Chapter 9
One thing I love about this story, is you taking actual events from the show and then...."Deedldee-ing" them up :) I'm sooooo happy you have continued this. I know I pushed you, but I know a good story when I see one :)
Author's Response: LOL I love how you made an adjective out of my screen name! :) Thank you so much, Sally, for every single thing you've helped me with on this story. I'm so happy you liked it! :) xx
10 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2012 01:23 am Title: Chapter 9
Beautiful. I liked how the first time Pam tells Jim she loves him is in there. I always wish the show had the first time she said I love you to him. That would have been awesome. And yes, do sleep on it. It truly does generate creativity, no joke. Btw, what is the title of the story where Pam dies during childbirth?
Author's Response: Thank you! I wish that too, that we would have seen her first I love you, and I would love to have seen their first date too. Um, I think the story you're looking for is by jazzfan, Almost Blue http://mtt.just-once.net/fanfiction/viewstory.php?sid=5274&warning=4 It took me forever to get myself through reading it, it's absolutely heartbreaking and emotional and so well done.
At any rate, I'm trying to think of another story idea... hopefully it comes to me soon. Thank you so much for sticking with me on this story, and thank you so much for the lovely reviews! :)
Date: March 22, 2012 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
YAY! I like how you took some of the events from season three and reframed them in this world. How even the art itself that she made was different. Not just that he was there to see what we saw in her show. And the snippet from Phyllis' Wedding was nice too. That's a really hard episode to watch. We didn't get Michael's scene with her in this universe I bet. But I also bet Pam would've gladly had it this way with Jim there instead of Michael :)
Author's Response: Thanks! The end came out differently than I originally planned, but in the end I thought it wrapped up better this way with little snippets instead of delving into recreating each episode entirely. It would have been a longer story with the same outcome, so I didn't want it to be dragged out too much. In my world, Jim would always be at Pam's art show instead of Michael. Thanks for reading! And thanks for sticking with me on this one! :)
Date: March 22, 2012 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
Such a sweet ending :) I loved how they were so sure of that they wanted that even the day of their first kiss they were talking about fifty years in the future. And the art show? I like your version way more than what happened on the show. Jim telling her how proud of her he is and her smiling when she told people the eyes in the painting were her boyfriend's made me smile. Thank you so much for this story!
Author's Response: Thank you! The fifty years thing was my subtle way of having them show that they'd be in it forever without all of the dialogue that's already been written in other stories. Thank you so much for sticking with me through this story, it really meant so much! I hope you're inspired to write something new soon! :) Congrats on the ribbon!