10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2012 03:09 pm Title: Part two
I finally got the chance to read the second part, and this is exactly what I was looking for when we talked in July. :-) I love all the little hints about other episodes (especially why Pam caused the computer to crash in Fun Run) as well as their banter back and forth. Best of all, though, was how you made the Halperts seem so real and warm. After all, Jim must have come from a warm and loving family despite his idiot brothers. Bravo!
8 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2012 07:24 am Title: Part two
Loved the way you worked in a lot of 'trivia' from later episodes. Great story. Thanks for posting
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2012 12:03 am Title: Part two
Loved it! I read this with a smile on my face the entire time. It was perfect. The way you write Jim's parents is exactly how I imagine them to be, and the whole discussion between Pam and Betsy in the kitchen? My heart kinda melted. Also the home videos and pictures? I could picture everything. I really did read this entire thing with a stupid grin on my face. You are my favourite writer, so whenever I see anything from you, my day is made better :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2012 09:44 pm Title: Part two
YAY NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!
ok, now i'll read it and write a REAL review. :o)